Inspired by my story, "Loving the Nightmare" -- Twilight Sparkle travels to the alternate timelines she saw while chasing Starlight Glimmer. Seeking knowlege, she instead finds lust, passion, possession and desire.
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Hmmmm maybe it is just me... But this chapter feels strange. Like it was too easy. Almost like it was the bad end to this part.
It feels like there should have been other options like heading back and getting help. Or combining and pooling magic to allow Celestia to be healed and also to heal the sun.
I can't really explain it. As I reckon it is just a me thing, but it really does feel like this is a "fake" ending.
sorry but Starlight should be an alicorn considering what shje has to control. and what will happen if she died. feankly the best move was to evac the remaining ponies
That made me cry. I am kind of sad as well that a pet will be leaveing.
Damn it I don’t have anything to wipe my eyes or blow my nose right now.
What happened to Starlight's slave suit?
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About 2 or 3 chapters ago, Twilight and Stralight were attacked by these octopus/tentacle monster thingsthat nullified magic and forced the suits off of them
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Nope, they forced suits retract back to collars.
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From part 4 of the blasted lands
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Oh, I see. Thanks!
So, both their suits are dead? A pity.
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That was whit I thought was Celestia's plan as well. Evac all those who you could then leave this planet and her corpse to be consumed by the dying embers of a broken star.
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What? Celestia was in her state well before they arrived in the Blasted Lands, and she herself said that the stasis-like state of her was the only reason she was hanging on, and that she was effectively dead. To quote a certain ancient tree residing deep within a certain magical forest as a protective entity, 'I was doomed before you started'.
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Yes but she also stated that it was possible to heal her if she had basically double the power that she would have at her prime. As said just feels like it was the "bad end" so to speak. Like it was too easy.
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Where would that much power have come from? Twilight's not yet in her prime as a alicorn, nowhere close, and Starlight's in her weight class, not Celestia's.
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That is why I said regroup. They have according to Celestia 6 years. That means they could easily go back and ask others for help e.g. Cadance or others. Also they could pool the magic from other ponies.
Especially since they now somewhat know the way. Also feels like there could have been other solutions. I don't know I am not the author just saying what I felt.
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Or get her Celestia to handle the sun part while she maintained the sheild
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Might work by passing sun duty off to Luna for a day. Since they did say that whoever became Celestia would basically be stuck here. But yes since it is shown that Luna and Celestia can handle the others duty for a time it should be possible for Celestia to pass that to Luna before helping to fix the sun or maintain the shield then have this universes Celestia do the other.
Then if the sun is fixed they don't need the shield which means that in a few months she could heal herself and thus all is well.
Yes it would take longer, but it seems like a more logical outcome.
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Yes either this or evac seem better then unicorn Starlight taking over
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Could work but I don't think we know if there are other Boltholes there could be ones that we don't know about.
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6 years to find them
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Very true.
honestly i teared up working on this chapter, and i felt that you wrote a very good sendoff. i was fine until you told me which song you were using, and the mental images from the reference all but had me sobbing at my computer.
very well done
if they were prepared they could have hit her with a petrification spell during the swap and then fixed the sun but they were not and could not bear thinking of waiting
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that would've pretty much been like taking mr house out of his stasis pod and leaving him alive from new vegas, celestia would still suffer even after everything was fixed
Wow, that isn't how I expected it to end. I figured Twi and Starlight would help charge the crystal to get the sun fixed, and then Celestia would pass on. Im not sure they really need someone to control the sun, now that it's fixed. Not a bad ending, just not what I expected.
I think it would have felt more natural if there was more foreshadowing, but it being a surprise was kinda fun. It's just like when Starlight took Twi's suit onto herself, but even less expectedn
In a story I started reading primarily for the clop, I did not expect such an emotional chapter. Enough that I'm just weeping right now. Bless and damn you author.
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As something I started writing just for clop, I never expected to tap into a lot of the things I have in this story.
I can't say that I like this outcome very much. But the story has been curious at least. I'm still somehat curious to read further but so far it hasn't been all that interesting.
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No worries, I'm glad you've read this much, but not everything is for everyone and I can respect that.
You know what? This chapter has been the hardest to digest as a reader. I'm not complaining, no, not at all. It was an emotional upheaval that has hit me hard. from the finality of Celestia to the finality of Starlight's arc. But how will Twilight handle the loss of her student from this point forward? That is now what I am looking forward to, how Twilight deals with that emotion...
I can only hope (dimly) of reaching such a height as this tale has been going with my own story. (Nah, my tale is too tied up in its own version of an alternate Equestria.)
Like others have stated, I came for the non-con tag, but have stayed for the tale that you are spinning here. I've only started to read this story recently (a few days ago at this writing), and I have plenty of chapters yet to continue from this point. (I probably put this story on the "Read it Later" list when you published the latest chapter...)
I am thanking you for the opportunity to have been reading this story. It is going on my bookshelf now.
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Thank you for your interest in it and taking the time to comment.