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The Aces

Blackout is a Lieutenant Colonel in the Royal Military of Equestria. He is leader of an elite unit used to deal with problems by force while keeping a low profile. Most ponies say they don't exist, and none know about the operations they carry out. This is the story of the Aces.

Chapters (3)

The Beginning · 18th Jan 2012 · 1,789 words
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Foul Play · 18th Jan 2012 · 1,403 words
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The End of the Beginning · 18th Jan 2012 · 2,452 words
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MrMusicalPony

MrMusicalPony #1 · Dec 17th, 2011 · · · The Beginning ·

3 Out of 5. I never give a rating under 4 without a reason, for constructive criticism sake.

Everything is fine.

2nd person is not. 2nd person takes away the ability to really understand the character.

Blackout

Blackout #2 · Jan 26th, 2012 · · · The End of the Beginning ·

^Fixed it
By the way, the story l▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓▓es will have filler material because my other story is going nowhere.