• Member Since 9th Oct, 2016
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Cherry delight


Just a writer who churns out stories for the people of fimfiction

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When ponies think of Discord they scowl. In the short time they have known him they think he is evil. Discord comes across as insane and powerful. Ponies think he is attacking Equestria. They should know better. As Twilight finds out, no one is evil for no reason.

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That was awesome it was a better reformation for dicord for one but at the same time the main 6 beileved the story too easily it might have been better to just have them beileve once that discord turned the world back to normal but other then that amazing job!

7843387 thank's
Yeh I do think that the change we believe you thing was quick but I have a reason (thinks of a reason) umm uhh all of the othe times villian's have been reformed they trusted them? E.g Starlight shimmer um glimmer
( really saved yourself there cherry)

But seriously thanks for taken the time to comment hoped you liked the story :twilightsmile:

I liked it because it was cute. It was a touching backstory about Discord and it had a sort of nice alternate what-could-have-happened-instead thing going on that turned out to be pretty cool.

Could have been better written and I see a lot of potential in the premise, but decent story.

7857076 thank you
I am still quite new to the writing thing but (if you look at my first story) I have improved
Glad you found it "decent" :twilightsmile:

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