I watch you grow. You grew smarter the older you became. I just wish I could hold you and hug you. Those days are over. They were older a long time ago. Just know no matter how far we grow apart, a mother's love can travel across land and oceans. I can never forget you.
Nice fic, very sad, but really well done.
I like this, the main issue is mainly some spelling and grammar that can easily be cleaned up. Overall, me gusta.
- King of Eggs
Thanks for your comments I'll do some editing to make it more readable