This is going to be a three part story. All featuring the CMC and Big Mac in some way. With each and every release of this, the story will become clear with this little fic that I'm working on.
---------------------------------------------------------------------
Rated: Teen
Language
Adult Situation
Page generated in 0.065 seconds
Total duration
1,009 users online
2,142,946 hits today, 2,156,967 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
I have a feeling I know where this is going, can't wait to see if I'm right.
7825153 Me too, I'd be surprised if it wasn't.
7825155
As would I
7825943
7825155
Sorry it took me a while to reply. What do you to think is going to happen?
7826308 That somehow Big Mac is going to wind up being the father of all of the CMC.
7826317
Yeah, you pretty much hit the nail on the head. ._. I need to up my game a bit. Are you enjoying the story so far?
7826612 Well, I'm notoriously genre savvy, its possible that others won't figure it out.
Oh yeah I am enjoying it so far.
7826612
I had the same guess as 7826317.
Well, this should be interesting, I look forward to seeing how Scootaloo's chapter goes.
Good story
, a thought I would have liked a chapter of the CMC talking to each other and reacting towards being half-sisters.
7856925 I actually had the idea for that as well. I was thinking about having them pile up in the old CMC Clubhouse, just going back through past memories.
7856975 Sorry, I thought that wasn't the case, because in the story status it says that the story is complete. Or the CMC talking to each other is going to be a sequel story?
7856990 Imagine it as extra content. It was going to be done after the Scootaloo chapter, but I kinda wanna add a bit more to it before I call it quits for Motherly Bonds.
It's an interesting premise, I really do like the idea of it, but it feels like a lot of it was rushed. This sort of triple bombshell I would expect to be a lot harder to swallow, but it looks like everyone was fairly upset at first, then a few minutes later everyone's all smiles and hugs again.
Overall I do commend you for taking on the idea, but it just seemed hurried along.
Yeah, gotta agree, this needs a chapter about the CMC.
7856999 Yeah, sorry, again is just that the completed tag confused me.
7857123 it kinda was. Which I need to go in and do a lot of fixing. One major downfall of my writing is I get the idea to write something, write it, look at it a week or two later and just start picking it apart, realizing that I could have done so much more. So far the only one that I'm proud of is the Red String of Fate fic of mine and the results show how much work went into that. Kinda wish there was an option on here for putting up rough drafts to get feedback on.
7858012 No, it's fine. It's my fault. I originally thought of doing just three chapters, but got to thinking that it was missing something else and after everyone mentioned having a CMC chapter, I decided to add the fourth chapter. Though I do need to go in and do some much needed editing in the other three chapters.
7858912 I know that some tend to upload fics and then go back and edit them. I've got a paragraph of a story sitting in my drive I need to work on, so I don't have anything uploaded, so can you upload something then go and delete the chapter later? Or do they tend to get annoyed at that sort of habit? It may be a good thing to suggest. Or you can hunt around for a couple Editors.
7859634 I used to have a couple of editors, but they had to quit on me because of class. As for uploading a chapter and taking it down, I'm not entirely sure how the mods will take it. Though I'll probably do that and if it does become an issue later down the road, I'll stop.
7826612
Oh dear god...
What Sweetie-Belle found out is exactly mirroring my life....
I've been in her situation. At least my mother(who I was told was my sister) had the guts to sit me down and tell me everything.