• Member Since 10th Aug, 2014
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HardRockLlama


I'm a musician, artist, and aspiring writer. I'm bad at everything, and you won't like what you see.

Comments ( 7 )

Hahahaha :rainbowlaugh: Twi, you dun goofed.

Nicely written, hehehe

Meh, too cliche. Good for what it is, to be honest, it's just I have seen it done before. Kinda lost its luster, you know?

7798791 I get that. While I was writing I was like, "I'M A FRIKKIN' GENIUS!" but while posting it, I thought of all the stories that are based on this kind of thing. Road Trip for instance.

7798410 Thanks! :) It's difficult to nail the punchline when you're limited by the 1k+ word requirement.

7799124
Don't I know it, hahaha

Understanding the ending is eluding me at the moment. Did Twilight write her story on the back of the letter to Celestia she wrote earlier?

Cause that's all I got at the moment.

8943590
Perhaps it's not as clear as I'd like it to be, but the line, "careful not to present the wrong [parchment]." is the passage that is trying to make clear that there are two separate parchments being handled.

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