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Brony Roadtrip
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Most stories like this tend to be trash. I have to say its fairly decent. Its tolerable in terms of the re is no easy to spot spelling or grammar errors and while not a whole lot was shown, mostly a quick splattering of basic information told for set-up there is still enough set-up to get readers invested once you start uploading characters.
Though it would help more to give descriptions of characters, actions, and scene transitions. Sure people got the generic or basic idea of what characters look like, but it always add more life too the story by adding extra tidbits like clothing changes, or noting the weather or stuff like that.
Well, you caught my interest.... let's see where it goes.
Ooooooooooohhhh how i cant wait for the next chapter
Hey, this is pretty good.
Im not an expert so dont take my advice seriously but i dont think their is anything you canhange to make it better because already good in my opinion
P.S First
Liked and favorites. Can't wait for more.
Great chapter. But now I can't help but feel that Anon isn't oblivious but scared of getting himself a girl. I mean need c'mon boy look at the signs.
Besides alternating the time line and getting punched by sunset (I would have charged her) I'd say this story is good so far. I'll read the next chapter tomorrow.
Goodness Gracious! For a moment I thought he was gonna do what most people do, with fluttershy . Thank's for the rejection.... I'm a horrible person to most people.... I know
7895948 oh please. I've done that when I read the title...
7897731 Ha. I would feel the same
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Let me tell you, I've already planned out who Anon takes. I'll give you a hint: it's someone you'd least expect...
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I'd guess but then that would spoil everything. So I'll wait for the surprise.
7899863 Callin it now... Sunset Shimmer
This getting updated anytime soon? I mean this is great.
O///O and so it begins.
KO awesome chapter, Rarity's birthday party is gonna great for everyone to have fun and enjoy the time of being alive.
All you need to end this chapter is a subtle *wink*wink*
Rarity's father is named Rick.
Hopefully this isn't the Rick from 'Rick and Morty'
8085560 I didn't plan on that but you actually gave me the idea to consider that
8087802 Oh Boy.
Anon didn't see that coming, did he?
Wait, I thought she was his neighbor?
Grate story just hope it isn't dead and a little fact about Rarity's dad is his cannon name is magnum
please update
Wow, didn’t expect Anon to be playing Rainbow Six Siege, while I’m playing Rainbow Six Siege
update soon
So, where's Rarity's long lost brother Morty?
Will there be any more chapter's coming soon?
I love this story pls keep it updated
This is pretty good so far, hope to see more of it soon.
Pretty good just wish that there was more chapters to bad it won’t get finished
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That's what her Son will be called