You are Anonymous, and you think your life is normal. That is, until the fall formal happens, then you begin to see all the weird stuff that happens all the time. Watch your adventure unfold as you help your friends fight the baddest of the bad!
Most stories like this tend to be trash. I have to say its fairly decent. Its tolerable in terms of the re is no easy to spot spelling or grammar errors and while not a whole lot was shown, mostly a quick splattering of basic information told for set-up there is still enough set-up to get readers invested once you start uploading characters.
Though it would help more to give descriptions of characters, actions, and scene transitions. Sure people got the generic or basic idea of what characters look like, but it always add more life too the story by adding extra tidbits like clothing changes, or noting the weather or stuff like that.
Besides alternating the time line and getting punched by sunset (I would have charged her) I'd say this story is good so far. I'll read the next chapter tomorrow.
Most stories like this tend to be trash. I have to say its fairly decent. Its tolerable in terms of the re is no easy to spot spelling or grammar errors and while not a whole lot was shown, mostly a quick splattering of basic information told for set-up there is still enough set-up to get readers invested once you start uploading characters.
Though it would help more to give descriptions of characters, actions, and scene transitions. Sure people got the generic or basic idea of what characters look like, but it always add more life too the story by adding extra tidbits like clothing changes, or noting the weather or stuff like that.
Well, you caught my interest.... let's see where it goes.
Besides alternating the time line and getting punched by sunset (I would have charged her) I'd say this story is good so far. I'll read the next chapter tomorrow.