Based off the story "Elements of the heart" (written by me) This tale explains how each pony couple discovered their feelings for one another and became something more than Friends.
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Saro0fdemonz
just another brony with random story ideas.
Saro0fdemonz
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"AJ...what do ya say we go hang our somewhere?" She asked with a smile.
Watch the capitalization. Really cute and had some adult humor in there.
Interesting. Shows some potential. A little too fast-paced; everything seems like a rush. I'll keep an eye out for this one.
Where's the story that this is based off of? I want to read that.
i gotta admit that i dont really like fics where rainbow is a lesbisan but this was reall good bravo
Ahhh, the spell route. I tend to like that. It makes the genetic connection much more solid.
Overall, it needs a LOT of polish but on the whole is reasonably cute.
835322 Thanks for pointing that out for me, pieces of this were written while I was half asleep. I've been on a crazy work schedule XD
835454 I will be posting it soon, I'm writing up its last chapter right now and smoothing it over. I need to smooth this over as well and get the next chapters ready.
835348 It was originally written just for a small contest, but then I got the idea to keep it going.