You need an editor or proofreader, othersiw,I'll keep an eye on this, just because.

Sequel please!

I believe this deserves a sequel, cause it feels incomplete with that ending.

Good job mate.

7688632 I m thinking about a sequel. not completely sure yet.

7688830 I may make a sequel but i'm not completely sure yet. we will see in time.

Sequel

"Hey Rarity?" Sweetie Bell said walking down her bedroom stairs. "What's all the noise...oh!" She stood at the bottom step, staring at the sight of a small dragon, cock erect, eating out her sister. She slowly backed up the stairs and locked herself into her room.

And here I was hoping Sweetie would join in.

Spike took it a step further by grabbing a hold of his throbbing cock and placing it at the opening of Rarity's sopping wet hole. He slowly pushed his cock inside of her feeling every contraction Rarity's nethers made. Rarity squealed and squeezed on Spike's dick, making him gasp and and lose control. Spike soon went all the way, his scales pounding and slapping against the weak mare's rump. He licked at her ass and fingered it slow, as her broke her pussy in. Rarity loved this, she loved spike's large shaft being sucked and pulled by her innards.

Spike moved his penis up to her butt and pushed in hard, painfully entering her tight hole. He moved his fingers downstairs and played with her pussy more as he wanted more of her juice. Spike knew this feeling was coming to an end the pressure was becoming too much for the little dragon. With one last thrust, he release a wave of sperm and cum into her deep ass. It soon overflowed as cum spilled out past spikes waist and onto the floor. Rarity cried out in pleasure as a large spray of fluid squirt out from her vag like a hose. She gasped and breathed heavily, Spike did the same. He almost collapsed into the small pool of cum that puddled on the floor.

Okay, that more than made up for Sweetie not joining in. Thank you.