Musician, entertainer, entrepreneur, anime convention owner/founder, ex-military (Army), mechanic, and now story writer. DJ_Laen on Twit. Feel free to ask questions or request editing/proofreading.
In the wake of her ex-husband's death, one mare must come to terms with her guilt as she attempts to find the truth about his death. Could bipedal creatures from the stars really be involved somehow?
After Princess Twilight came to Canterlot to amend her friendships with some old marefriends, she inspires one pony to begin a journey to learn everything she can about the power of friendship.
7951886 The reason for that is because when I first released the story, I had the first nine chapters as one whole prologue. People didn't like to read over 20K words in one setting. So I chopped it up into smaller chapters (1-9) and rebooted it. The hardest part now is making sure all future characters have enough depth and personality. And it's going to be a lot coming soon. About 2 per chapter.
That BITCH she didn't tell Lyra!!!!
7899658 Yep. And here's a spoiler alert: It's gonna torment her for a while until she faces her demons.
Why does this story have so many dislikes? I mean, it can't be that bad, right? ...Right?
7951886 The reason for that is because when I first released the story, I had the first nine chapters as one whole prologue. People didn't like to read over 20K words in one setting. So I chopped it up into smaller chapters (1-9) and rebooted it.
The hardest part now is making sure all future characters have enough depth and personality. And it's going to be a lot coming soon. About 2 per chapter.
PToN