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For once I some one actually puts frisk ask a male though I actually like the idea of chara playing older sibling but, hey it's your story about that is just my preference
7623549 It's good to have preferences, opinions, and what not. It gives the writer new ideas.
7623556 yeah in fact i actually picked up the idea from an author i love who does amazing crossovers, have you ever heard of tatsouru his undertale crossover did somthing like that and it was pretty cool
Seems pretty good to me. I kinda get the idea of what plot this will lead to. However I think it needs a little more detail.
For once Frisk is a male. Most Undertale fans think of him as a female for some reason. I don't know why though. There is one question though I would like to ask. I like the idea that the main six play a big part of the story but shouldn't Frisk be friends with kids his own age ? Maybe with the Cutie Mark Crusaders ?
Keep going. The more chapters you write the more attention you'll get.
7712082 The reason why I made Frisk 16 is because I was planning on the cutie mark crusaders making them 16.
Great chapter !!!
If chara is going to be in this better make them female
I love it! Keep it up!
Hmm. Good idea for a story, but to be honest? Yeah, you might need an editor for this. There's a lot of grammatical and spelling errors, which is a real shame 'cause I love Undertale and really want to see a good MLP:EG/Undertale crossover story.
Very entertaining
I hope to see this story continues I find it rather interesting.
is this story dead? i know it can still be revived, i just get worried when the last chapter was done in 2016
Pwease update?
UPDAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATE!
