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One Last Gift

Thousands upon thousands centuries ago, six ponies came together in a forest.

All were friends, and all were dying, so, as a final farewell, they gave the land one last gift, something to protect it for all of eternity

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DwarvishPony #1 · Oct 3rd, 2016 · · ·

Admittedly, this is a cute idea. A bit disjointed in it's presentation, but nothing a bit of polish can't fix. I'd recommend getting an editor to give this a once over, though. There's quite a few grammatical errors that detract from the story after a while.

Raichu