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Imperfect Perfectionist


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Warning; This being a Camp Camp crossover, there will be racist comments, rude language, and violence. You have been warned


That's it. Max was never standing near any of Neil's inventions ever again. Now he was covered in fur, had a bone sticking out of his forehead, and was missing his hoodie.


Scattered across Equestria, the five friends enemies residents of Camp Campbell must reunite, and help the Mane 6 fight a rising evil.

Armed with the power of not giving a fuck, Max gets ready to lead the way against the greatest being there ever was.

Yipee

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 25 )

Pinkie + David = Max's Nightmare

Going to keep an eye on this one. I'm not surprise that Neil's science project caused this, he did create a sentient AI with an out of date compute and some calculators.

Before I Read: He better get a pony-copy of his hoodie from Rarity.

I've read it now. And honestly, I LOVE IT!

I NEED to see Max verbally abuse each of the Mane Six at least once, berate Gwen for breaking Neil's science-thing, beat David with a guitar after he and Pinkie start singing together AND the Quartermaster. I don't care HOW you do it. I don't care what he does. I just need to see the King of the Forest that talks through his moustache in this fic as a pony.

You really nailed the characters in this story. I can't wait to see more.

I have a reason to live now, thank you

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Actually, I have a different job for the quartermaster. You see, with Gwen and David out of the picture, it's time for him to rise and take his rightful place as King of Camp Campbell

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Thanks! I binged watched Camp Camp so I could know what they'd say! I only spent like, an hour writing those 2,000 words, the rest I was just editing. So. Much. Editing

8267895

In an upcoming chapter, Neil thinks Pinkies a prostitute and punches her in the face

This story is still amazing, as I expected.

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See, I'd expect that the Quartermaster, being so old and strange, is actually somewhat familiar with Equestria.

I seriously think you need to change the rating from Everyone to Teen, before it gets shut down.

for anyone who hasn't seen episode 6 yet i won't spoil anything but i want to warn you be prepared for some fucked up shit

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it was fucking weird and speaking of that episode is quartersister going to appear

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No, he's ruling Camp Campbell with an iron fist, enslaving the others, and all that jazz.

Do you watch RVB?

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either max, nikki or the platypus what about you

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Max, always Max. Or Gwen.

My fav in RVB is Wash- he's awesome

okay i won't spoil anything about the next episode but i do wanna warn you prepared to be hit with the feels

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