What derpy's life actually consists of behind closed doors....
Chapters (6)
- Member Since 11th Jun, 2012
- offline last seen Jun 12th, 2015
IronCupcake
just writin about dem ponies
IronCupcake
Joined 11th Jun, 2012 ·
Offline
Also LikedSimilarAuthor
- ChoppersTopHat · 2.7k words · 83 2 · 3.2k views
- Doctor Perseus · 26k words · 71 3 · 2.5k views
- Moustache Queen · 1.9k words · 132 14 · 6k views
- Emperor · 4.5k words · 104 1 · 3.2k views
- Typographical Error · 39k words · 37 1 · 1.2k views
- Tarot Card · 89k words · 1,912 137 · 26k views
- Ravenwood11 · 29k words · 209 8 · 8.9k views
- rthjsrtjhjewshsweh · 19k words · 163 7 · 13k views
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Join our SubscribeStar to remove these adverts!
Stats
Page generated in 0.078 seconds
Total duration
1,030 users online
1,352,713 hits today, 2,205,040 yesterday
FIMFiction
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Follow & Support Us
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
watch this before reding http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cg-_HeVNYOk
and listen to this during it http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5JvbD2Zc9I
thanks for reading:D
Using the Derpy video to tug at peoples heartstrings is a mean move...
... I died inside at Chapter 3. I could never pull off a sad moment like that... I would probably crack a few jokes and then BAM! Moment's ruined. But seriously, I almost cried.
... CONTINUE FOR PETE'S SAKE!!!! You can't end it like that!!!!
814611
I concur.
That was moving, and I think you should send it to EqD.
But wait.
If that was the end of her diary, then that must mean...
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
...........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
You son of a bitch.
The title made me think of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qq_3UBAaNhk
It was a good story, I'm not really into ditzy being retarded though, sadly I see a lot of bronys writing her that way due to her eyes which dose tend to rub me the wrong way when I come across those stories, but that is just because I tend to see her in a different light having had a squint (messed up eyes) myself as a child which I had corrected, and my little girl also has a squint but the patches seem to be working for her (I had to have an op to fix mine
)
But I'm going off topic, sorry about that I tend to rant on a little on that subject
It was a good read and I did really like it and would recommend it to anyone.
stays with him or follows her mothers wishes and leaves to stay with Cheerilee.
I would enjoy to see a sequel to it, I would like to see if the farther was serious about what he said or was trying to hide his abusive nature from the doctors and to see if Dream chaser
You can't leave me hanging now you made the only retarded ditzy story I liked and was able to read
814984 I am thinking about a sequel, it depends on how i feel the story stands. and by the way i had no intentions to call derpy retarded, i just thought it would make a good story. so i have nothing against special people or derpy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9CzcOcBb_ms
815318
I didn't mean to imply that you was against special people or derpy and sorry again that it seem that I was. Others have tried to wright a story like you have, but none have in my opinion been able to pull it off.
well done.
ah sorry I didn't mean to sound like I was having a go at you
Were as you, you have taken a difficult and sometimes touchy topic and made a brilliant and heartfelt story out of it, for which I applause you for
815451
thank you my friend
hey guys try to share this story to friends or youtube readers so i can get a wider audience for the next chapter!
thank you!
814645
to deliver a good conclusion!
it has to be 2500 words
so im kind of compelled to make a new chapter hahaha
i will just wait for a wider audience to view the original story then i will work day and night
818552 Ooh a sad first fiction, should be interesting, but I won't say I cried over it after, 'cause I don't cry over fics any more
Man that was sad. Pretty good for a first fiction, and nice plot. Dream Chaser...who'd have thought it? Anyways, I'll continue reading and then I'll give you my full analysis on my thoughts.
)
-Gear Shift/Fluttrick
-(Egghead)
-(
Dawwww! Everything is just perfect! (But let me guess, everything goes wrong in the next chapter, right?)
Short, but sad. I knew this would happen at some point. Hopelessness will most likely ensue in the next chapter, and I dunno, death? Suicide? Let's find out(clicks on the link to chapter 4)
Oh yeah, and great job so far! Just in your next fiction, make your chapters a little longer okay? And keep it up with your sad fiction work, it's amazing!
814645 Sorry, but I don't know how you grade fictions, and I'm not saying it's horrible, please don't think that, but it's not quite Eqd worthy. Sorry >>IronCupcake, but that's just my opinion, but I'm sure you'll do greater in the future! And you know what! Favourited, followed and liked!
818552 You'd better make a new chapter, because you just left everypony hanging, as if you murdered Dream Chaser and that was her last entry.
814657
i need you to do this for me
pick 1 or 2
Now that everypony should be happy with the ending i am starting a very special project that i think everypony is gonna love!
Thank you so much for reading!
Dawwwwwwwwww Everything's so peachy all of a sudden, nothing can go wrong, right?
842860 Ooh, ooh, can I help? And I loved the ending, though I can't help but wonder what will happen if this story continues.
844130
)
is there some form of private message on here
(its a super secret project
844406 Yeah, just go to my page then there should be a envelope picture next to my username at the top of the page, click on it and write what it's about then below write the message. Just send me a message when you want to, and tell me if it doesn't work.
840880 Dos.
Make 2 chapters
819874
Let me guess...
THE WORLD ENDS!!! Jk,jk.
Can't wait to read next chapter!
I'm pretty Shute her dad is a big @$&@ lier
And then he killed her! Jk, jk. I'm just feelin a bit crazy.
844417
I never knew there was a secret language! That explains why I can't read half the comments sent to me. Lol!
955594 happy u liked it
The fact that she can forgive her father, even though he killed her mother, is nothing short of amazing. Usually anger, hatred, distrust and bitterness towards one's parental murderer is often felt, so the fact that she can even have any kind of relationship with her mother's murderer and forgive him for having done so... Wow, just, wow. There are those of us who say that we could behave like that, to forgive like that, but we never know how we truly will react until the situation is upon us. It's easy to say a thing, and an entirely different matter to do it.