Chapter 4
I write to you today at the hospital, it has been weeks since my mother’s death and I am going to fulfill her dream. I am having surgery to make me normal. I have a 50/50 chance of living today, and if I live I will start my new life just for my mom. Somewhere up in the heavens my mom loves and cares for me, and I will find love in this world for her. But that is not what I am here to write about; before I was left alone for the doctors my father confronted me.
He came up to me with tears in his eyes and I was confused. He walked up to me and gave me a big kiss on my forehead.
“I love you,” he said, “I had never realized it before this day but I always have. It took the chance of losing you for me to realize my love for you. When you exit this hospital we will start our new lives, for your mother. And if you do not survive, than I want you to know that I care about you, I love you.”
The doctors pulled him out of the room, I was tearing again, I never thought that he would ever say that to me. His love gave me strength and now, I am about to undergo the procedure.
Goodbye my friends for now, I will write to you as soon as possible. Ready to start my new life, wish me luck.
THE END
watch this before reding http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=cg-_HeVNYOk
and listen to this during it http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=x5JvbD2Zc9I
thanks for reading:D
Using the Derpy video to tug at peoples heartstrings is a mean move...
... CONTINUE FOR PETE'S SAKE!!!! You can't end it like that!!!!
814611
I concur.
That was moving, and I think you should send it to EqD.
But wait.
If that was the end of her diary, then that must mean...
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You son of a bitch.
The title made me think of this http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qq_3UBAaNhk
It was a good story, I'm not really into ditzy being retarded though, sadly I see a lot of bronys writing her that way due to her eyes which dose tend to rub me the wrong way when I come across those stories, but that is just because I tend to see her in a different light having had a squint (messed up eyes) myself as a child which I had corrected, and my little girl also has a squint but the patches seem to be working for her (I had to have an op to fix mine)
But I'm going off topic, sorry about that I tend to rant on a little on that subject
It was a good read and I did really like it and would recommend it to anyone.
I would enjoy to see a sequel to it, I would like to see if the farther was serious about what he said or was trying to hide his abusive nature from the doctors and to see if Dream chaser stays with him or follows her mothers wishes and leaves to stay with Cheerilee.
You can't leave me hanging now you made the only retarded ditzy story I liked and was able to read
814984 I am thinking about a sequel, it depends on how i feel the story stands. and by the way i had no intentions to call derpy retarded, i just thought it would make a good story. so i have nothing against special people or derpy
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9CzcOcBb_ms
815318
ah sorry I didn't mean to sound like I was having a go at you I didn't mean to imply that you was against special people or derpy and sorry again that it seem that I was. Others have tried to wright a story like you have, but none have in my opinion been able to pull it off.
Were as you, you have taken a difficult and sometimes touchy topic and made a brilliant and heartfelt story out of it, for which I applause you for well done.
815451
thank you my friend
hey guys try to share this story to friends or youtube readers so i can get a wider audience for the next chapter!
thank you!
814645
it has to be 2500 words
so im kind of compelled to make a new chapter hahaha
i will just wait for a wider audience to view the original story then i will work day and night to deliver a good conclusion!
818552 Ooh a sad first fiction, should be interesting, but I won't say I cried over it after, 'cause I don't cry over fics any more
814645 Sorry, but I don't know how you grade fictions, and I'm not saying it's horrible, please don't think that, but it's not quite Eqd worthy. Sorry >>IronCupcake, but that's just my opinion, but I'm sure you'll do greater in the future! And you know what! Favourited, followed and liked!
818552 You'd better make a new chapter, because you just left everypony hanging, as if you murdered Dream Chaser and that was her last entry.
814657
i need you to do this for me
pick 1 or 2
I'm pretty Shute her dad is a big @$&@ lier