A man is sent to a strange world as a shapeshifter after failing to listen to the internet. He does his best to make the most out of his new life. Although there are some who just can't leave well enough alone.
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Ok, Tia has been corrupted, recommend vaporization
Nice use of Churchills ''We Shall Fight on the Beaches''-speech
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Do you have any idea how long I've been waiting for someone to call me out on this? Bonus points if you can find the references in the earlier chapters too.
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Interesting. Though I highly dislike how you're having Celestia here. Seems extremely out of character. HOWEVER, when it comes to Displaced, I'm used to characters being different due to differences in the timeline, and this one certainly qualifies as a different timeline.
Though, in truth, there's more nations than just the ones you mentioned, actually. Some admittedly shown in the comics, but still. And I guess the griffons survived better in this timeline, eh?
Oh, and since he absorbed Zebras, he should have access to some levels of magic now. Not just potion making. Zecora has been shown briefly to have other skills. From what I've seen, from both the shows and comics, her magics are more... adaptive, than ponies, but not as directly powerful without some sort of item to act as a channel for said magic.
I have a question, if the griffins and other races know that the ponies are refusing their demand, why would they not subsequently start the war imedently? Before the ponies have time to build defences.
that last section of luna's speech in chapter 5 was so stolen from winston Churchill!
Okay, so I'm pretty stumped here.
WTF are they not deposing Celestia to pacify the rest of the planet? Jekyll hates her guts, Luna has seen her war crimes and decried them, and deposition doesn't have to end in the deposed ruler's death. Take the Lunar Rebellion, remove the "Eternal Night" thing and bam, perfect solution (particularly since Tia lacks the Elements now and Luna has his support.) Exile and house-arrest are viable and often used alternatives.
Instead, they are planning on a defensive war against the rest of the PLANET which will cost hundreds of thousands if not millions of pony lives alone, let alone enemy losses. Even if they win, every other race and nation in the world will hate and fear Equestria for the next several thousand years.
All to keep an colossally incompetent entitled sociopath who 1.5: 2 of them hate (Jekyll + half of Luna since guess what? NMM hated Celestia and that hate came from and went somewhere) with a God-complex on the throne of their country? The complete failure to think of the repercussions staggers me.
Ah. That explains things somewhat. Drunken authors do not well-reasoned plotlines make. I would just like to say, story likely would be better without this plotline (it makes no goddamn sense), since it was a unplanned drunken idea. If you did decide to keep it, more lead up, reasoning, development, and everything would be needed to actually make it viable.
As it is I'm considering dropping the story here since it appears to have shifted focus, objectives, and theme completely.
I'll probably read a few more then skip to the latest chapter to see if it changes back but I'm not overly optimistic.
To question; 1, why not just depose Celestia now, or just outright kill her? God knows this version of her deserves it. And 2, Why didn't Jekyll kill Dopple? Like he said, there's stating your opinion, and then there's insubordination, and I wouldn't let an insubordinate second-in-command live, solely for the fact that, since these Alphas lead the enforces, that means some might side with Dopple over Jekyll, and when we're talking about creatures made from and carrying the Blacklight virus, just a few breaking rank and spreading out would more than likely lead to a worldwide pandemic.
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All good questions, and all have been answered in later chapters. Otherwise I'd answer them here, but spoilers.
Also, I'm glad you posted the Abaddon inspiration AN, I hadn't realized that I'd put in the wrong Tyranid. It's not a Hive Tyrant, it's a Hierophant.
I want him to tell them how to build nukes
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No. No that is a bad idea for all.
"I know not what WW3 shall be fought with... But I know WW4 shall be fought with sticks and stones"
from being pardoned to getting married and preparing for a sudden war within around 24 hours.
kinda threw me for a loop, but I guess I shall read on.
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Not many people have commented on this, makes me wonder how many people have noticed how much was dumped on him. It will make sense in time.
This is dumb. They both sensibly pointed out that this is Celestia's fault, having Jake's army of monsters defend the country would be a bad idea, and then they decide to do it anyway at the drop of a hat and would rather start a world war (with associated Jingoistic rhetoric) than chop Celestia's head off? What on Earth are they even thinking? That's idiotic. Why is he even going along with it all?
This is completely threw me out of the loop.
The fuck is this.
Why is it so bad.
Why do I enjoy it so much.
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Emerald Gleaner: Viral unicorn
My favorite Prototype book series. Read all the books.
Also i know what scene your talking about. The one where Emeralds Diamond dog Alpha went against her words. I cant remember his name but i do know it was not frirdar. Er close to that. Faust its been awhile since i read them.
I loved the Viral Unicorn series! I read all 4 books in one go, took me about a week and a half maybe two weeks to finish. I'mma keep a close eye on this fic too. Sidenote: The only reason I recognized Churchill's speech is because of ERB.
Dialog after the drunk theme song was bad.
Really cain't wait for rewritten chapters, the pacing of this story is WAAAYY to fast.
I'll come back when this honestly good story isn't paced like it's written by a five year old on crack
Luna's speech was almost verbatim from Winston Churchill.
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Can't recall what was wrong anymore, but I can tell there have been made changes. Good ones, in my impression.
Was Dopple supposed to be the Oskar to Jekil's Alex? That's my best educated guess.
This is a good story I have read in all my years in fimfiction I give thee a thumbs up. Also I like the uniqueness of this story,and I never heard any stories like this until now. I hope there will be half-swording ........ you don't have to it is just my opinion (Although keep up the good work).
I rate this story 10/10
I see originality isn't something your really striving for.
I have read The Art of War and this is actually my favorite quote from it.
I never thought it possible but there is a pony on a high horse, and she really needs to get off of it
Like honestly Luna shut the fuck up ya preachy ass bird
She balks at him killing the assassins but she would readily put her horn through his head? I smell a hypocrite boys
Eh, this chapter made me lose all interest in this story.
Wars are more or less never enjoyable in written form, and always take up too much space in a story.
Edit: Am resuming reading due to assurance it doesn't drag on for 20+ chapters.
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I recommend you keep at it. The story is a much more personal following of jekyll and luna antics than a battle summary.
why am I so happy about this?!?
Make your own DRAGON ENFORCERS! DRAGONS!!!!!!😍
Equestria at War...
This will be one Tarterus of a story...
Celestia fucked up hard. Her retirement is inavalable wile Luna will make a great leader. So i guess the main story will be extreamly derailed... Poor Pinkie... She will not be able to spread happyness for a wile...
On second thought perhaps right after the war it would be fitting to start season 2 - 9.
After a war piece and Friendship bloom better with everyone to anoyed by conflicts.
Any plan for displaced fun? 1000 years yet i doubt ge meet other displaced yet...
Sabaton?
Huh