Snail's parents always knew he was... slower than the other foals, and sometimes, he unwittingly interfered in situations he didn't really understand.
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just a panromantic asexual demiboy writing about ponies. Anon is lazy character writing, and if they're a character, you need to buck up and get creative
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That episode was a waste of time
7538112 hmmm
*looks at your comment's timestamp*
hmmm
*looks up at the view counter, which is at zero*
hmmm
*sees you spreading unwarranted negativity in this fandom*
hmmm
just because an episode doesn't move anything along, and instead decides to develop a background character further, does not make it a waste of time. you must remember that this is a CHILDREN'S show with MORALS and LESSONS that the writers are trying to express. Sometimes these lessons can't be done effectively in the span of 20 minutes
Filly? Um, no, Snails is not a filly. Fix your first paragraph.
Either get rid of "the" or get rid of "his".
Capitalize "and".
I gave the story a like.
7538195 oh wow, didn't notice i got that wrong. thanks for catching that
7538217 thanks for the notes. however, on the second one, it is grammatically correct to do that, since both questions are separate questions in the same line of thought
Enjoyable backstory and build-up for what we have seen later. Such nice detailed father and son relationship as well as the first meeting of the two!
Also, I love the way you did the divides. Snails!
PS: The "filly" is still present and there is non-capitalized snails once...