The BBTS is a special group of mostly-pony mercenaries that travels through space in order to capture deranged and dangerous criminals for the bounty on their heads. This tale focuses mainly on Original Characters made by the BBTS clan in the starbound forum, so I am not entirely sure if this story will be approved; if my stories are rejected due to a mismatch of themes however, I will not object.
Page generated in 0.081 seconds
Total duration
967 users online
1,469,426 hits today, 1,996,409 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Good work,
i have a comment..... 
this sotry is good.... but... 
this sotry is ... kid ..... 
.... this story is well good. Amazing story! 
oooh, i'm so fan of this story.
Hello Spikey-Wikey! Awesome job on the fics! Will you be posting the Atrixin ones here too? Just wondering. Watched.
905794
Thanks! I'll definitely be doing my best to continue this series to the bitter end. Thanks for your support; I'll do my best!
i have a question, is the knight (Alex) a human, gillian, robot, or something else because i myself am not entirely sure. (i hope he is a gillian in battle armor :3) anyways, i love the story due to its cleverness and comedy. hope to see more!
always fun to see our fic go further ( im grimness btw)
will you be using the oc's that are more recently added to the op in the next chapter?
1586235 I intentionally left out the details because I need the flexibility to give the character the personality that I want, but also to not make it into something that the OC's owner would not like; being vague usually pleases everyone if it is not noticed by anyone.
1589296 That page in front? I'll have to take a look at it since the end is near in ways more than one.
This story really, really needs editing. I mean, look:
Your character changed gender three times in the same sentence. Either they're a great unicorn, or you need some help.
You kept using "mice" the entire story, when it should be mouse.
All I could think about was how various villains introduced here fit well as the Metal Gear Solid bosses. Good show.
3601102
Well darn. Because those characters are based on real life males who uses females as avatars, I get a bit confused about the genders. It only got worse during the later chapters I'm afraid. Unfortunately, with my pharmacy program starting up, I have no time to proof read my works anymore. I'm just glad I finished what I've started. Thank you very much for pointing out a serious flaw in my works. I appreciate your feedback.
3601102 He could be a Pyro, couldn't she?