• Member Since 17th Jun, 2015
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Meanlucario


I'm a guy that likes grimdark stuff.

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Rainbow Dash learns Rarity's secret passion for blacksmithing shortly after the events of 'Suited For Success,' and wants to understand more.

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Comments ( 6 )

A little stiff. Could use a little polish. But certainly not bad for a first story. Keep writing! Practice makes perfect.

While the concept is interesting, the story doesn't really do anything. It has this set up that is interesting, but then it drops into a disagreement, and opinions that end up getting repeated in the time jump.

Where was this going?

7289853 Honestly, it was for a EQD challenge for making a fic base on a image, or vise versa, and I thought that a story base on the idea of Rarity having a 'unladylike' passion would be fun. It's far from perfect, but it's a good starting place.

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Thanks for the advice. I'll try to keep them in mind in the future.

I know the image this was based on. It always makes me imagine "Holy Diver" playing in the background.

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