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Arthr1tis


A huge Cr1TiKaL fanboy.

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Tunak Tunak Tun had better be in this as a villain (yes, I know that's the name of the song, not the singer, but the AGK fan videos name the singer after the song). The idea of him being Leopold's arch-nemesis is in so many vids, and I love the concept. Please tell me he and his three Tunak clones are villains in this fic!

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This is basically an Angry German Kid parody in the form of a story, so of course I'll include Tunak Tunak Tun. Other people from the AGK parodies will also be included, like Downfall Parody Hitler for example. Jake Randolf, Leopold's best friend will also appear, but at a later date; Ms. Suckscox & Diknoz from AGK82's parodies will also be one of Leopold's many enemies; his only true arch-nemesis here is his demented PC.

Angry Dominican Kid is another ally of Leopold's; you know, after Leopold bested him in a fight & they got along afterwards? Watch AGK82's video of that so you'll understand what I mean. He'll appear, you'll see.

Angry Japanese Kid may appear, depending on the situation.

Stephen Quire from all those Freakout videos can be either a potential ally or villain, IF he's still able to reason with & not busy shoving remotes up his rectum out of anger, AGAIN.

ChristianU2ber will be another villain, no questions asked.

I can't help but laugh at this situation, because something tells me that the ponies are the ones who will unintentionally give the Angry kid one hell of a PWNAGE.:trollestia:

Also, ROFL on the Blue Screen of Death Karma. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh::rainbowlaugh:

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I apologize. That chapter wasn't finished yet; I must've published it by accident.

Guh, so far I only have one qualm with this story:
I really don't want this to sound rude, but I don't really know any other way to write without it looking like a rant, so here it goes.
NEVER use symbols to represent words. The & symbol was meant as a shortcut, not a literary device. Have you ever seen anybody use that symbol in a published book? I haven't.
Also, have you ever heard someone speak the & symbol?

"Look, he's both a hacker & a racist!"

I don't quite think you can verbally say a symbol.

Other than that though, I do find this story very interesting, and will be added to my tracking list.

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