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You forgot to close an italics tag near the end, the word Wyvertii seems to be the cause.
But yeah, I like. Man, I suck at this 'giving compliments' thing
7172037 Alrighty, I'll get that fixed up. Thanks.
There's another missing italics tag near:
Ahaha I see what you did there.
Anyway, a humanized sex-charged version of Gauntlet of Fire? Who's characterization is a bit telly but seems to be pretty balanced, overall? Neither dismal nor exalting of the characters...
Alright. I'm in.
More please.....also loled with brae's pec reference
7172118 Yeah, I'm having a horrible time with the italics. I imported this from G-docs and they got all fucked up somehow.
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I have to always do regular expression magic whenever I import to standardize the length of the tabs and stuff... and remove extraneous italic openclose tags right next to each other and stuff, so I undrestand.
I just read your story and would love to say it's good, it's got potential and you should finish it.
7172188 Don't worry, this is an on going story. Thanks for reading~
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Any time
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How'd you do it? I've been trying to figure out how to import a Google Doc without a link being involved, but all I can think about is, compy and paste.
Well so far so good. I can't wait for the rest. Also I hope Spike gets some cool powers or something?
7172304 It has to do with the share settings in the doc itself. You have to set them so everyone can view if they have the link. Otherwise, it remains private and won't post properly.
7172311 He already does, I just haven't shown it yet. Don't worry, it's not anything Gary-Stu ish.
7172321 Hey if it's a character I like I don't care if he's powers are op. So are is powers normal for his race, different, more powerful than normal or his races powers but with a twist?
You have my attention.
7172481 His power is not abnormal for his race, but rare. As for the twist, you see him demonstrate it in the show quite often. But in this universe, he manifests it a bit differently.
7172585 So he can teleport and summon weapon and a level of pyrokinesis?
I like it! ANOTHER! (Smashes mug)
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You have piqued my interest good sir
7172781 More like general pyromancy, but I'm still ironing out whether or not he can teleport more than just small objects with it yet.
7173398 I looked it up on a super power wiki that green fire is stronger than normal fire and can ignited in water. Also it can do fire healing but I think that a bit of leap. I say start small in the early chapters and bigger stuff in the end. I still say he would have a sword he can summon. It would be cool if he also could summon little things like a first aid kit.
7173677 Well, Green Fire tends to be Greek Fire. That stuff burns and burns. It's damn near impossible to put out, and hurts quite a bit.
I think this is very creative. It's cool how you translated everything into human terms. I'll read more in the coming days.
don't know about you but that would enhance her beauty in my eyes. three awesome things together. a blue woman, chocolate, and crumbs. the only thing that could enhance it is whipped cream. i am odd, i know
I like what I'm reading!
I'm loving this so far can't wait to see where it goes.