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Looks like there are some errors present, here’s the first one I noticed
You’re missing a ‘be’ between “to” and “toting”
Yay it's back!!!!! Also why did you change the picture?
Nice new picture and nice talk between Fluttershy and Ember.
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I try my best to keep this story as free of spelling and punctuation errors as possible, but things still do slip through the cracks on occasion. Thanks for pointing that out. I'll get it fixed.
I really like how Ember and Fluttershy interact socially with each other.
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Because I felt like this one represented the characters more accurately.
Lol I have to admit Spike and Ember are lucky they ran into Shy when they did all of that. Honestly if that had been me I would have been pissed. Sure you can do your whole nude thing, which I find to be a bit bull to be frank since as much as you want your culture respected you have to respect your host country and their rules since you are a GUEST there, but to outright fuck infront of someone you don't even know and in Spike's case worse someone who is a good friend is really disrespectful. But like I said they lucked out since Shy is the type to be cool with it. BUT Spike better not get any ideas, he try to make a play at Shy and Discord WILL have words for him, and he may be dragon lord BUT he is a Lord of Chaos and a force of reality bending nature lol. I did like that at LEAST Del see that they way they have been acting ISN'T respectful to their host and want to do a better job of showing them the respect they deserve. Ember tho is just SOOO hotheaded that I can't see her being so willing to see why people shouldn't just go along with what is the normal for her. I do wonder tho, what is Spike going to do once he run into the adventures? I mean is he going to threaten them, that wont look good at all, how much political power does he still have in Equestria anyway? I mean can he be apart of the royal family in Equestria and still be Dragon Lord that seem like a big conflict of interest on both sides. And even if he did keep his Equestria power isn't that a secret anyway that most of the population doesn't know about. And like I said if he does threaten them i mean new Dragon Lord show up and attack people who are doing something that even Shy said is technically LEGAL since that is unregulated lands. Which would than bring up a question of what will Twi do? I mean she is the closest ruler of the area and if she let something like this pass it will set a bad view to the people when it comes to those in power, but she wouldn't want to punish Spike for it since she might have done something similar. The difference is SHE has the authority and power to do it there while he does not.
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A: He's not interested in Fluttershy romantically. It won't ever happen.
A: She is indeed hot-headed, as you say. However, Ember is trying her best to manage her temper and make some new friends along the way. Much like how Delmira is trying to better herself as well.
A: Spike never really had any true political power (in Equestria) in the first place. Influence, sure. But not any concrete executive powers. He still retains his citizenship status in Equestria but as a ruler, that is only with the Wyvertii.
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Well that last one is SUPER interesting. By that point than he by all right CAN'T do anything to stop them. And any actions he take will just come off as a foreign political leader attacking locals or flexing their power onto others they have no right to. This could cause some interesting drama for sure. Since as you said this Spike still has ALOT of growing up to do clearly by the way he acts and thinks. So I really REALLY don't think he would be able to defuse a situation if one were to come up, it just feel he lost alot of that social grace he once had when he was younger. And even more so Ember will act out. She wont be able to take that those ponies wouldn't listen or respect Spike even when he state is position. She will feel it is her right to 'handle' them for disrespecting her mate and Lord like they might. And even if they don't they still DON'T have to listen to him and respectfully decline to do what he says and he can't do anything. Hell if they are seasoned adventures and treasure hunters I feel they would know that and do that. No reason to risk fighting them when they can't make them stop anyway ;ol.
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I won't spoil anything, but I will say this much: their confrontation with the Treasure Hunters won't turn out the way you're expecting. Let's just say there will be an interesting twist thrown into the situation that will make things both more complicated for them and simpler at the same time.
love the fact that FS is sharing a bath with a complete stranger
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.....K
To be honest I miss the old cover
Wow. I like this new chapter a lot more than the previous one. I don't know, I guess Ember is a more interesting character to follow than Delmira. That and Fluttershy was great in this.
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considering the leader of them, i would have to guess Ahuizotl and or Daring Do. because they all seem to be connected in most stories they show up in.
My man spike! XD