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Hehe, good chapter. I'm loving this fic.
well spike hope to survive this.
I hope winter silk get to be involve
Torch is much more pleasant in this one, haha.
I also like the modification that Spike is actually embarrassed to be hailed as the hero. I appreciate he's recognized but not for something that was not entirely his deal. It never seemed like he earned that over say... Cadance and Shining Armor.
Whelp... looked like Spike is boned now!
Oh, Spike, that was just...the worst. I mean, damn. I can't...I'm gonna do other things now because...yeah.
Then again, seeing the kind of women he's hanging around he gets about 1% off his part of the blame. Also surprised he didn't get hit more.
Just read this a would say it's the best and by the way nice going on spike's past
I really like this chapter, can't wait for more.
Geez... Well at least Winter's more upfront about her desires... I get enough innuendo fencing from Selena and Christine in A Brave New World...
Congrats on describing a naked man and somehow not grossing me out. Torch sounds like a really cool guy. I felt his pain when he described Spike's parents.
I can describe Spike's little mishap with Ember only one way. Epic. Fail.
7393799 Same.. though I can't blame him really..
Hmm, I'm just wondering why Celestia didn't try to send Spike back to his people.
I seriously wish a character similar to Winter Silk will be a friend of Ember. X3
Wow! I I'm loving everything about this story already! Great job.
Continuing!
jeez ember way to over react, least she didn't kick him in the nuts I doubt that there healing magic can heal a busted ball
This was a funny and Intergang chapter I hope Spike can still grow and he will be as big a Torch in the future.
Can't stop laughting!!!!!!!!!!!!
Damn, spike is pathetic, granted is not his fault but damn. Btw Why are you making spike so dumb, I get that his naive but in the show he is at least logical.