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Nice to have you back once again, man.
*sigh*
Don’t mind this. Just my “In case of Spoiled Rich” gun. Firing on your command, Enclave.
Well I have to say I am a bit mix on this chapter myself. I just mean Spike getting tired of explaining himself to everyone, well no duh does he really think everyone in a completely different culture should just go along with what his NEW culture is just because it is said so. I mean it isn't like his people wear some kind of headdress or something. No they are doing something that goes against the very bases of Equestrian culture. But he is getting pissy that everyone isn't just cool with it. And they can say what they want but Spoil wasn't fully wrong. Even if Diamond all of a sudden went along with Spike's new ways. There are plenty of younger children who are forced to see this now, and it is clear that SOMEONE in his party doesn't know how to keep her hands to herself in public. I find the Apples to the the weirdest part a bit. I mean they were all for it, and even seem to encourage this. I figured at least Mac would be more protective of his younger sister. Which this seemingly going right to the harem route even more, by suggesting that Spike has the okay to fuck any mare in town he want which I don't like. I like keeping it to his two and not having this be Spike collecting females like badges. It is clear that Celestia and Luna are bending over backwards way too much to make Spike feel okay with being back there, but I feel it is a fail on their and Spikes part. When you go to another country with another culture you still have to respect the native culture and not force your own on the natives or else you will have nothing but conflicts.
It's one thing that Spoiled is fortunate that Spike or Twilight are not taking issue that she basically assaulted someone, who is not only the leader of a foreign nation but also an Equestrian hero and family to the nation's royal family.
If Celestia ever heard... how much of Spoiled will be left to bury? None? Plus her home? Okay :I
really love how AJ and big mac are so cool with nudism and letting Spike and Delmira have sex in there barn. cant wait for the nest chapter!maybe a little applecest between big mac and AJ?
so... is Spike gonna get a harem of every single mare in town (at least)? 'cause I'd kinda like to see that, him with not just the CMC but AJ and the crew (I forgot who's single) and all that... but one thing that'd kinda been bugging me: Why couldn't they compromise with a loin-cloth like garment (which is essentially a bikini) when in equestrian public? and I forget, is Spike (and the others) like dragons, in that they can breath fire, swim in lava, etc.? I forget
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A: I never intended for this to be massive harem story in the first place. However, I will admit that there may be one more potential mate added in the future. But three was the maximum number of mates I had planned for Spike. It is highly unlikely that I will suddenly change my mind and make that into 20 women.
A: You're absolutely correct. Spoiled wasn't entirely wrong when expressing her views, which was exactly how I wanted to portray her. Yes, she was supposed to be an antagonistic character, but with valid points and concerns. As for Spike being pissy: you have to remember that he still has a lot of growing up to do, despite the responsibilities and power that he now has.
A: The Apples have known Spike for many years and trust him implicitly. He also made it very clear that he wasn't going to have sex with any of the Crusaders. As for Apple Bloom: she's very mature-looking/attractive for her age (15), so it's only natural that he would be aroused by her naked body. But again, that doesn't automatically equate to sex.
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Incest will not occur under any circumstances.
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A: Nudism/Heroic Nudity is one of the core themes of the story, and not something that I will ever compromise on. I know that's not a particularly detailed or thought-provoking answer, but those are my guns and I'm sticking to them. The Wyvertii can all cast fire innately through their hands, but swimming in lava requires more skill and training (See the chapter with the Gauntlet of Fire).
I'd like to have the Wyvertii customs become a thing that Equestrians practice just to spite spoiled.
I’m sorry to say that I really dislike the character of Delmira.
At least Ember and Spike are trying somewhat to respect the culture they’re visiting, but with her godhood status and “diplomatic immunity” she’s running roughshod over all the taboos of the current culture without a second thought.
Even with the nudity laws being waived for the invited dignitaries, if Equestrian law is anything like standard western laws, she’s already broken about a dozen of them, including many dealing with the sexuality of minors.
Don’t get me wrong, I’m enjoying the story. I just understand why ponies are a little angry about the disrespect being shown to their town.
More please.
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This is just getting more interesting as it goes on,I don't care if it's way in the the future please let the CMC join his herd.
I disliked this chapter in so many ways, first Spike acts like a moron because everyone didn’t adjust to his nudism, EVEN DO he took like a week to adjust. Then when Spoil rich confronts him with an arguably reasonable argument, instead of defending his point of view or simply accepting his error he acted like a bumbling idiot, achieving nothing. Finally when Spoil insultes his whole race in front of the Dragon lord, A princess and a Goddess he did nothing. He didn’t acted like a king nor a diplomat, he seem more spineless than anything else.
I think I'm about to tag out of this story my dudes. Spike has not matured any since the beginning of the story he still acts like a horny 14 year old. The phrase teenage hormones is thrown around like a shield to absolve anybody from the responsibility of their actions. All the interesting situations I was hoping for when Spike reconnects with his old family has been boiled down to situations that are "awkward" and "embarrassing" in a really shallow way. Not to mention how pathetic Spike gets when he immediately goes belly up when sex is involved.