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I was wondering when he'd show up.
I thought the confession came out fine. It wasn't out of the blue, it made sense.
Probably because "sexual liberation" and "gender egalitarianism" are not necessarily synonymous.
I think I woulda been more impressed with Ember if she beat Garble normalways.
And of course she started with hand-to-hand. It's her specialty. Wait for Onyx to learn the magics.
I wonder when Garble would have appeared. Great job. That was awesome.
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Even though we'll never see Equestria with a male leader though, that's more to alicorn genetics than anything else.
OH MY GOODNESS! FLUFFY!
D'aw, that confession was sweet. Damn you, empty stomach!
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Damn, that took a turn. And I thought I had shitty self esteem. Ember has like, none.
And Battle's a colossal asshat. Saw that coming.
BTW, the word you wanted from Spike was Morale, not Moral. You use Moral like that with Moral Support, but alone, it is Morale.XD XD XD XD XD
TSUN-EMBER IS BEST EMBER!!!
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Uhhhhh....wut?
7315244 GoldenCyclone4 is right. You want morale, as in "The beatings will continue until morale improves."
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7315690 Got it, thanks. I don't know how I missed that one.
See, now that's good character development on all sides. Excellent chapter!
7238459 Do they have spa's? Do they have libraries? What about hotels or inn's? Do they ride around on giant lizards?
Me, being bored, asking random questions that don't need an answer. But it would be interesting to see if they do have books. Like a souvenir for Twilight.
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If they rode giant lizards it probably would've been mentioned already. Spike would get run over instantly.
7326558 They Wyvertii are primarily a forest dwelling people, ergo they don't have a whole lot of open space to ride any animals around on. That makes domesticating animals for transportation a waste of time. Hotels, inns, taverns sure they have those. They are advanced enough culturally to have their own written language but they lack the means of mass producing books. Written material exists, but it is expensive and hand-bound on animal skins.
7331673 Are the books going to play so.e part in the story? I ask because you got really into them. Also, into the spa thing, is the bathhouse basically like a spa?
7332297 As far as the books go, I'm not sure yet. And the bath-house is basically their spa.
7332393 books could be on ancient magics and how to perform them or history. Or erotic novels and stories like in Equestrian.
.....Yep.
My new favourite Spember Fic and in the top 5 Spike fics.
Great so far. Can't wait for next chapter!!!
Loving the story so far, can I just say you have become one of my favorite authors recently, you have such a lovely way of presenting your work, Im following three of your stories with rapt attention, Two thumbs way up!!!!!
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S-senpai n-noticed my work?!!!
But in all seriousness, thanks I really appreciate all the praise. I'm happy that you enjoy reading it as much as I enjoy writing it.
7393799 Yeah, Spike is definitely not a Gary-Stu by any stretch. By putting him through such awkward situations, it enables the readers to better empathize with what he's going through. We've all had times in our lives where things get out of hand and (get really embarrassing) but...I hope nobody's had it as bad as Spike.
I tried to make Torch a more relatable character in this as opposed to how he was presented in the actual show. While he wasn't exactly a villain, per say, he did come off as being rather abrasive. I wanted him to be more of a family man. A guy who loves his friends and daughter.
Igneous Rock: Words to live by.
So glad they confessed and can't wait to see what comes next.
7398463 That was the vibe I was going for. Two to three times normal. This isn't the hyperbolic time chamber, after all.
I found Ember’s confession to Spike down right hilarious. You even squeezed the words together. XD
I had a feeling that you were just getting it done and over with, it’s the anime cliche it’s understandable.
Oh, that was a sweet chapter. And just love the ending!
This was a funny and sweet chapter I happy Ember stood up for Spike I hope in the future Ember is open to Smolder joining if and when she shows up.