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kinda reminds me of the Roman empires customary's
This isn't that much exposition. And it seems to be delivered very well, it's Spike being told a story he needs to know, and drawing conclusions about them. It's rather engaging and doesn't distract from the story as a whole, I think.
7252191 I'm relieved to hear you think so. Exposition can sometimes irritate readers, if it's done improperly.
I like how it's not all, "Oi, u want som fuk?"
Ride the Onyx, Spike. Only then will you be a true Pokemon master.
Little romance going on. Great chapter.
Huh. The origin of the Bloodstone Blade sounds very similar to that of Fire Emblem's Falchion, swapping blood for a Fang. Interesting...
7252716 Am I the only one who always forgets Onix is spelled with an I and not a Y when it comes to the Pokemon?
7255326 I'm referring to the stone, not the pokemon.
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Well... Now that we have the obligatory bath/hot springs scene out of the way...
TIME TO HAVE ONYX KICK SPIKE'S ASS!!!
The description of the bathhouse sounds amazing.
7252222 yeah, usually, exposition is done poorly, leaving me like
But here, it is done very well.
i'm not the only one who figured out what this was for, right?
I find it funny that the Wyvertii find it weird that the equestrians keep the toilet and the bath in he same room
This was a very informative chapter