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I’m a little confused as to why Sunset’s mother would abandon her like she did. Assuming she was Equestrian, then Sunset’s father must have been of Wyvertti descent in some capacity. If that’s true, why would she give up her child for being a “freak” if she was aware her father was like that?
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You are indeed correct in assuming that Sunset's father was Wyvertii. However, what you have to remember is: Sunset is telling her origin story as she understands it. So it is, naturally, going to be biased based on how she perceives what happened and her own experiences during childhood. Her mother didn't necessarily give her up just because she looked different. As to what those possible other reasons could have been: I leave that up to the reader to decide.
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Oh. Didn’t think about that...
interesting that you made sunset half Wyvertii.
I know this story is about spike and his coming to be what he is, not to mention seeing sunset as a wynertti, but man I WANT to see spike take up on fluttershy's offer. She pretty much have it out there on aplatter...
Just sayin..
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I think you meant Sunset.
Huh.... interesting addition.
Unlike most canons I’ve read, Sunset’s mother is PROBABLY not going to be Celestia. Mostly because I don’t see her giving her up to begin with. And even if she DIDN’T, she would most certainly recognize her own daughter even if she were a little older attending her school.
Can’t wait to see where it goes.
This actually makes sense.
reaction of each:
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I try.
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You always gotta watch out for the quiet ones.
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fixed
Dead mother... More than likely check.
Has a strong desire for friendship. Check.
Lives with and understands animals. Check.
All we need now is for Sunset to burst into song and she'll be a bonifide Disney Princess in this universe.
If there is no EQG world in this universe I wonder if you have plans for a certain trio of songstresses? What ever could they be up to in a world as different as this I wonder.
I want this to be made into a comic
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Me too.
Well, this is as far as I go, I love how you write romance and slice of life but damn I hate how you write action, Spike just saw the love of his life fall into his arms, for all he knew she was dead. And the first thing he does is get distracted by another woman’s tits , then he refuses to kill her because he has to be a fucking white knight and finally he looses once again for his massive stupidity. I know he couldn’t kill her because you wanted to introduce a new character and that’s also the reason he lost, but it makes no sense in the context of the story. He just trained for 3 month straight to get stronger, more agile and get better control of his magic, he has a dragon form that’s almost invencible, AND he just saw THE LOVE OF HIS LIVE FALL TO THE GROUND LIKE A CORPES, explained to me why wouldn’t he go all out against this threat.