“I enjoy interviewing Minnesota civilian workers and elected officials, who in their own way, are as important to fighting the Solar Tyrant’s invasion as any front-line soldier, sailor, or marine. I enjoy interviewing youthful humans and ponies that are wearing muddy and oil stained work clothes because they have stepped away from their important jobs a few minutes before our interview starts. I enjoy these interviews much more than asking old-timers, sipping tea and eating tapioca pudding in retirement communities, to recall past events that have happened years or decades earlier. I present to you three of my most entertaining, thought-provoking interviews describing how human and pony citizens of St. Louis County, Minnesota are contributing to winning the Conversion War.”
- Preface written during July of 2023 by Field Researcher Paxton Peyton Randolph of the Minnesota Historical Society.
Suppose I'm a new reader, who has never heard of Spectrum before, or I'm a Spectrum reader who decided to check out the side stories, starting out with this one.
What's the story about? What info can I get from the description alone?
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The main site for Team Spectrum, shared universe stories is:
http://conversionbureau.wikia.com/wiki/The_Conversion_Bureau:_The_Other_Side_of_the_Spectrum#comm-2148
7103313 ...pardon? I was inquiring about a clearer description, not the Spectrumverse's wiki site.
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I don’t see anything wrong with my introduction. My intent is to provide my reader that he or she is reading an issue of Minnesota History Magazine’s coverage of Minnesota’s contribution to the Conversion War. But, I’m open to suggestions that don’t spoil the overall story.
I added “… describing how human and pony citizens of St. Louis County, Minnesota are contributing to winning the Conversion War” to the long description.
A little slow for my tastes, but I liked it in the end, so I gave you an upvote. Wonder if you'll write more.
I’ve finished editing the online story, “It Was Suppose To Be A Costume” by Admiral Q Ponyform. Please read it and give it a like, if you enjoy it, when you have the time.
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/288621/it-was-suppose-to-be-a-costume