Angel Bunny is tired of all the attention Fluttershy gives him. Angel likes attention, sure, but when it's so much attention that he gets no time to himself, he doesn't seem to want any more of Fluttershy's love.
He does what any sane person would do, and tries to get her in a relationship with the first pony he sees so as to get Fluttershy to leave him alone more often and to hopefully get Fluttershy somepony ELSE to love. He picks the first pony he sees, and that pony is Rainbow Dash.
This is an extremely old story that I never released. Dalek Saxon helped a lot in the creation of it. Hope you enjoy. I don't think I'll be writing too much more Flutterdash-esque stories from now on, since I've got other things I'd like to write.
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I love the bitter mindset Angel has versus Fluttershy and Rainbow Dash's. XD
I could feel the awkward, at one point. Decent job, sir.
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Thank you both!
The beginning of this story advances WAYY too fast. Let's see, Fluttershy shows affection to Angel for a while, and then at night Angel runs away for a moment, finds Rainbow Dash who for some reason decides to talk to Fluttershy late at night, runs back, and then Rainbow Dash asks her to go on a date. Wow, if only dating were that easy in real life.
You think you are the god of your own little world, disregarding common sense that the ponies would have. Quite frankly, you're just a dreamer, and not a writer. Buy yourself some talent.
7352539 Thank you for the criticism. I'll be sure to slow down things further in my future writings.
No, I don't think I'm a 'god in my own little world,' but alright.
Thanks again for the comment. I'm going to keep writing though so I can progress and get better at it.
Don't you have to -- theoretically -- be a dreamer to be a writer? Don't need to answer, maybe I'm looking into it too much. Though, looking into things can help to inspire writing. Hmm...
Aw man, solid 9/10 man. Good job.
Enjoyable.
I won't bother with a few issues with the story since its old. But it does age ok I think and is still worth a good read the few years after you released it so good job