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Yeah, pretty much.
So, Griffin went from mercenary to TFS' version of Vegeta, Tythus went Tien in that they had various back and forth fights, Borealis pimp slapped Griffin, Tythus went and decimated Griffin's man parts (pretty sure Tythus killed all of Griffin's children. At least he won't have to worry about getting blue balled.) and Disarray was an asshole in that he did nothing. Awesome.
3-5 chapters to explain what exactly happened I think. Granted I never read Griffins story, but if what I did read is any indication, he just doesn't care, or he got paid and doesn't care anyway. Still, a rather interesting divergence.
Lets see where it goes!
5247751
I would say more of convergence. This is where everything begins to come together for one asinine finale.
5247728
Actually, now that I think about it, you've got the Vegeta and Tien thing mixed up, but... shit, I need to stop watching DBZA so much, it's starting to show up here.
5247866
I get the impression that it will not end so readily however, not with what you have wrought.
So much Chessiverse throwback. And Traveller throwback (miss those stories). And Far from the Tree throwback (canceled like Firefly). You know what, you should've called this chapter "Vaguely Familiar References to Things you Probably Can't/Don't Read Anymore".
Poor Gryphon, I doubled over in pain when that happened. Also I hope Borealis's horn grows back.
Great action in this chapter! Though that fight though ;A; Tythus, The Twins......
5248039
It should be noted that Tythus is the most badass character you'll ever see in this universe. Not Echo, not Starbuck, not even Ginger. You don't fuck with The Tythus. You just don't.
In memory of Griffin's jewels.
(Oh well. I never liked Griffin the Griffin very much anyways.)
Dat. Crotchkick....*wince*
Well, that battle went ugly.
Always a good strategy.
Horns grow back in the... uh. Echoverse, right?
5249118
...
"Fresh, black paint covered her scarred and pitted hull, some places still dripping from a hasty stay in the yard. Elegant, swooping runes of silver swept around her from stem to stern, pulsing with new magic. The bowsprit, an imposing bust of Nightmare Moon, the carving’s wings spread as though in streaking flight as its horn cut towards the rising sun. Deep blue sails danced and fluttered in the trade winds, and a fresh coat of varnish covered the woodworkings."
I like it. Great minds think alike?
http://www.fimfiction.net/story/167040/3/tower-of-the-west/dont-judge-a-book-by-its-cover
"The Loncastre sat at berth in the new airdocks built between two towers of a fort that overlooked the old river docks. She was modern, sleek and light. Expensive dark hardwood was reflected in the shining silver rails along the gunwales, and powerful twin mana-engines were slung aft. A large cannon sat in the bow atop a rotating mechanism, whilst other smaller versions lined the decks. The prow swept upwards into a beautiful figurehead of a midnight blue alicorn rearing, wings swept back along the ship and horn thrusting forward."
What??? B-But? But alicorns?!?
I was expecting the twins to be each others greatest strengths and their greatest weaknesses. They seem to work as a set so when Australis was taken out I was expecting Borealis to have gaps in his sentences where she would normally speak as well as gaps in his fighting style. NOW I HAVE TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!!! DISARRAY WHY HAVE YOU DONE THIS???
owww. Chicken Nuggets hurt so much, I bet Pinkie Pie felt it.
What you doing Pinkie?
Setting up for a going away party.
Tythus should be able to get through that lot. After all, its not like he is going to run out of ammo before he runs out of live pirates, cos dead prates are just as good as ammo. Im just wondering how did the Griffin get that much strength and power. Someone overcharge him or something?
5249274 '
Well. ... Shit. D:
5249463
It's the figurehead that really just makes it.
5249638
Alicorns aren't actually that tough, if the show is anything to go by. Sure, tons of raw magical muscle, but take that away and they're essentially downgraded from a 40-man raid boss to an elite. Both Australis and Borealis were brought down to an even playing field, and taken down with a combination of cunning, guile, and tactics. And fighting dirty. Tythus, meanwhile, is just a badass, and went down swinging outnumbered 20-to-1.
5249684
Griffin's always been annoyingly hard to kill. That's half the reason he keeps popping up here; I just like having him get wailed on.
5249892 What can I say... I'm a sucker for Luna.
welp I for one was not expecting the fight to turn out like it did... all I can say is disarray, what the fuck have you done?!?
It feels like no one got killed, that's good!
I was imagining him talking as he inhaled, making it really squeaky XD Oh god, I'm still cringing from that shot.
Also, I'm still giggling at Ferrous Oxhide's name... he related to you?
Shit, did...
Jesus Christ, did he just kill two fifth's of Equestria's royalty? Like, irreversibly?
...
Doesn't the world need alicorns? Like, to function and stuff? I mean, I'm no scholar or anything, but with raising the sun, and lowering the moon, and the auroras, and... I mean, holy fucking Moses, did Griffin just get rid of the planet's magnetic field? Isn't that kind of really important?
...
5249737
What's it matter if horns grow back or not, they're dead! They're fucking dead with no credits left! That's Game Over, man!
GAME OVER
5251049
The Meta is strong with that one.
OK, I still like Disarray, but... damn I also hate him so much right now...
At least their piracy is threatened now, With the captain losing his source of testosterone...
Ps. Now... I was telling this every few chapters, but wuere the hell is "In Last Episode" box? you actually added it few times, but after such a ling wait you should give us not only last chapter, with whole arc in a quick reminder, I am reading tens(even hundreds) of thousands of words per day, Do you think I rember what few chapters happened before? Or in last story? Please... It can't be so hard to give us a little reminder of last three chapters.
And Griffin... is he from another story? I never got to read all of the chessgame stories, so many of them were getting boring very quickly, If this one is a good story, what is its name?
5251414
It's Griffin the Griffin. And is known to be infamous, so that's not my call to make.
Shining Armor was busy filling out a sheaf of paperwork at his desk when suddenly he doubled over, gasping. At the doors to his office, the the two stallion guards hunched over. After a moment, it passed.
"...The hell was that?" one of the guards eventually wheezed.
Shining Armor gritted his teeth as he resisted the urge to vomit. "I don't know," he gasped. "But it must have hurt."
In Ponyville, Big Macintosh paused in his duties at the family stand. He turned to his side, gently removing Applejack's hat from between her fuzzy ears.
Applejack was not amused. "Hey! Big Mac, what gives?"
He did not respond, instead placing the hat across his chest and bowing his head.
A single tear trickled down his face.
I read this section and I was like, shall I lol or shall I cringe? In the end I did both, because the delivery was just right.
5251413
1: what do you call a wheel made of iron? a ferrous wheel.
2: http://knowyourmeme.com/memes/chemistry-cat/photos/sort/comments
I've always been a sucker for puns, it's one of the reasons this fandom is so great to me.
5247751 Yeah, to let you know Griffin isn't really like that in his story. Which since Rust used a DBZA reference in this so will I. When it comes to the chapters with Griffin it's "so non-canon it hurts."
5247866 Really? You think Griffin wasn't Vegeta from DBZA? I raise you this.
How 'bout that?
Also, I should mention that the argument between Griffin and Tythus where they go on about one person doing something to their possessions and vice versa is from Goku and Frieza, where Frieza was strangling him, Goku bites his tail, and they argue about who is the greater evil in much simpler words.
5253420
Non-cannon with regards to the griffons character or to this story that it is within?
And DBZA?
5253456 Dragon Ball Z Abridged. Look it up, it's really funny.
*crosses his legs and cringes in sympathy pain too* oh MAN! That's gonna leave a mark...
Also... was it Clock Tower you were referencing with the boss intro lines? I could swear I've read an LP of Clock Tower 3 that was like that...
I've read Griffin the Griffin and Falling Feathers, and I don't remember a scene like that, are you doing non cannon Griffin, or has this battle not happened in the other fics?
Or did I just miss something... That's probably it...
5253456 Non-canon as in that compared to everything that has happened in Griffin's stories the only way for these events here to make any sense is if this isn't the same universe as those stories.
5256534
Works for me
Ugh... with this i lost the interest.... you shoulda kept with your story, i never really liked griffin, oh well i guess im just a salty bitch such a shame...
/facepalm
It's really hard to take this seriously if you're not going to keep a consistent tone.
You're throwing nonsensical banter, nutshots felt halfway across the globe, and references to other sources in with the death of two alicorns.
DOES NO ONE RESPECT ALICORNS, ANYMORE?
How the fuck do you expect us to believe that the pirates somehow landed null bands on their horns off screen? Why would they fight in the open and let the pirates surround them instead of retreating to a doorway and bottlenecking their opponents, or taking to the air to leave half of them behind? Even if their horns get muted, their blows shouldn't be 'fending off' pirates or 'keeping them at bay', they should be felling them left and right and building a pile of corpses.
Even if Griffin caught Australis unawares, punching something does as much force to your fist as it does to the object. If the blow made an Alicorn's bones break, it should have done much more to the mortal Gryphon.
If Borealis was facing an enemy to the front, backpedaled, and tripped, then his face and consequently his horn shouldn't be within striking distance.
This message had been brought to you by the society of people who think Alicorns shouldn't be defeated with a single fucking blow.
LEAST OF ALL A GODDAMN SUCKER PUNCH FROM A GODDAMN JOKE CHARACTER!
...
The Zelda-esque Boss Battle intro subtitles were pretty baddass, though.
5261242
who said they were dead breh cuz i never did
yup
are you tellin me that DBZ is a lie
it will be if your sword is literally taller than you are
This message brought to you by authors who put shark jumping bullshit into their stories and fap to the ensuing rage.
FUMES!!!!!!!!!!!!! I NEED MORE FUMES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! THIS IS SOME GOOD FUMES MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
5262336
Because that is true comedy at its finest.
Best....
Line....
EVER!!!
It was all serious then suddenly, chicken nuggets!
Nope, I couldn't even keep a straight face while typing that and I will never look at chicken nuggets the same way ever again.
5273686
He did, but for all intents and purposes, he will always be at the time of the most recent episode while traveling Equestria.
I'm assuming that the griffin series and the echo series are no longer canon with each other and that they just have very similar characters with very similar powers and the same name but aren't the same people because this fucks with the canon soooo much
...what...how did he win against multiple alicorns and supposedly ....ugh....I don't even.
Not sure if I like the cross-over idea. I mean, you can introduce any characters you like, it's your right as an author.
But because I've read the Griffin stories and actually liked them, the image of the 'canon' Griffin (who is an asshole, but a good-hearted asshole) clashes very strongly with your Griffin (who is just an asshole). I have to keep telling myself, that the name is just a coincidence and that is a different Griffin.
Ew. Nope.
I hope Griffin dies a horrible death after being molested by every member of ISIS.
I'm out.
5255982 I believe at this portion of the story, it's become non-canon. Since the original story that Griffin comes from, "Griffin the griffin", and "Falling Feathers", are about Griffin raiding Diamond Dog warrens, freeing slaves, protecting his family, getting a job, therapy, and generally it's a lot less action-y in "Falling Feathers." Oh sure, you still get action, but the story has come to a point where it's on the lowest action so far. It's still a good story, but it's gone from hack-and-slash, to family simulation, if you don't mind the video game allusion.
Lets get it Shipmaster!!!
How do you keep track of it all? It wasn't until the very end of the chapter that the entire chapter began to make sense... I totally had forgotten about freakin' Disarray! XD Not to mention Lyra too XD