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Smexy...
...i have little to no idea what just happened.
Squee!
Wow. I hope you don't make us wait on the cliff hanger. And thanks for giving Coconut some screen time. He was probably my least favorite character till now but DAMN it why did BALTO have to be evil. I was hoping he would be almost as much of a bad ass as Echo.
Damn it... I liked Balto... Can't wait for next Monday.
Absolutely amazing, and though I'm not much of an editor, one thing got my attention:
I get what you're trying to say, but perhaps word it a little differently?
Glad to see that you've returned Rust, must say I was surprised with the change in character perspective. Below you will find some typos:
*forming what seemed to conclave, a - forming what seemed to be a conclave, a
*painful dance iaround the pot - painful dance around the pot
Noooooooooo they can't die!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My god man why are you doing this to me waaaa ha haaaaa
Oh noes...INSURRECTION!!!!
Dat's just not cool, brah.
Wait a sec... is Coconut a closet cosplayer? Seems like he would be.
Echo is my tulpa's name :D
[small world]
Your formatting for the level up bit is a little wonky. It's indented every other line, regardless of whether or not it's the end of the sentence.
2501967 If you're Brandon, I'm lighting you on fire.
Reguardless, Great work Rust.
I like the multiple perspectives and plotlines!
Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
2502215 Who is brandon? My name is greg.
2502261 Good, then you may go about not being on Fire.
2502276 but really though this person also has a tulpa named echo?
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*checks post date of II-First*
...sorry
I feel like I missed something 2~3 chapters ago... Wheres the Gingersnap, Echo and Miss Daring? And what about the Dragon?
2502286 Eeeyup.
2502357
If you're confused, just go and read it all again.
Echo, Daring, Ginger, Disarray, and the rest of the Cinderwings are searching around for the dragon during this chapter of the book. They have not yet found the cave.
2502409 Thank you for the quick catch up.
2502415
Don't worry, next chapter is Ginger one. All ten-thousand words of it.
WHO'S GONNA GET THE 1,000th COMMENT!?!?
A read later for me.
2502525
just had to
>updates once in several months
>gets featured AGAIN
Christ, Rust! you're too much for this site :/
Equestria is a dangerous place, man.
If you're not getting your throat ripped out in the jungle, you're getting strapped to the Wheel of Pain in Roam.
Wondering what these dogs were up to.
Hey, it's Coconut! I bet this will be a bit of a lighthearted chapt—
Oh. That's what I get for assuming.
Of course Coconut, jump in the shit hole......don't hide yourself in the garbage hole instead......not like it's right F-ing there.....
I would not wish Coconuts fate to anyone in the world. Beans are the bane of mankind, scourge of the world, and all around, the worst thing in the universe. I gagged a few times myself....
2502575
I'm too much for real life.
Another epic chapter and Coconut best pony. What was with Coconut breaking the fourth wall so much thats not usually his gag I mean it was entertaining but it seemed to be coming from the wrong character. I am a little dissapointed that you chose Balto to be the judas of the group even though I saw it coming. He has the most honorable name of the group and he dishonors his name sake with his actions.
Your really drawing out the wait for the conclusion of the battle at the Dragon's cave I'm thinking thats next episode?
one last question, that thing you do at the end of every chapter, is that a modified version of the fallout: Equestria leveling system? Like is that where that came from?
FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU.....
BALTO, YOU THICKHEADED, DENSE MOTHERFUCKER. We get to read this awesome, amazing story for the first time in ages and you go and screw everything up? I swear, if it wasn't for his pet hulk Boxer, he would be beaten to a pulp by now. Can't wait to see how Echo and Ginger correct this.
Coconut is my new favorite OC.
Also, nice cover art.
MOAR!
... wow. What a chapter. Props to Coconut for going as hard as he did though... I think when Disarray gets back, things are going to go very, very badly. All his careful planning just got shattered into itty bitty pieces. And that isn't going to go over well at all, at all...
... wait a minute... if Boxer and Balto knew about it... where's that leave Daring, Echo, Ginger and Zanza? oh friggernaffy...
Coming soon from apple, the brand new iAround!
We have no idea what it does, but it involves painful dancing around a pot! We think!
Cuz who uses "of" nowadays anyway?
Good chapter anyway. Shocking turn of events, I was waiting for that part where Coconut wakes up and smacks his head for having weird dreams...
Wonder where this is heading. And why the fuck Echo hasn't shown up two chapters into the new part yet. :#
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Thats a paradox.
Think about it.
2507133
You're thinking too literally.
Obviously he means that he's a denizen of the internet, so thoroughly integrated into the protocols and proxies that he's become an internet writing fanfiction machine.
2508033
Where the hell did you get the idea that THAT is what he meant...?
:I
._.
I:
.-.
All he said was that he's too much for real life...
2508033>>2508330
No, he's right.
I am one with the interwebz.
2508448
Fine, I give up...
It was just weird that he said it the way he did.
Almost as if it was something he pulled out of his ass on the spur of the moment....
Almost.
He could have said what you said, and I would've agreed.
Don't judge me.
Shit just got real.
2515042
I know, right? Kinda abrupt and out of left field, though. Makes me wonder if there's something I missed earlier.
Conut the Barbarian... I see what you did thar. :3
2516246 Indeed!
O_o Did not see that coming......
Sweet! New cover art. Was wondering why Ballot changed it's cover.
2524872
Again, the entire purpose of these stories was to focus more on world building Equestria, rather than the focus on the human character. As one might see in the to-be-released chapter, only the actions of the person are worth note; their identity on a whole is only important for the fact that they are a mover and a shaker.