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Yes
And so it finally happens.
Was going to watch/read some porn... but fuck that I got an update to read. So now echo has a human, a diamond dog, and now a pony form? Would be a bit cooler if Daring had a diamond dog form instead of human, but I see your reasoning.
Damn
Daring has issues
I thought it was pretty decent. Daring's rage was unexpected but fairly believably explained. Echo and Daring's relationship got some development. So all in all it was a good chapter to get things moving again.
Ooooooo looks like daring has found out
You know, I never really knew how this would pan out, but I like how this went nonetheless. Now, she finally knows the truth.
Also, 'dem Daft Punk references.
Excellent, relationship conflict and growth.
AAAAAAAAPPLOOSA!!!!!
Hooray, moar! :D
You are a very sexy man.
I mean that in the most heterosexual way possible.
And Echo knew, deep in his heart of hearts, there was only one creature on this world capable of being guided to such an ends by such a means.
Horseshit.
There are creatures on this earth that will hold a grudge and seek revenge till their dying day. Men who hunt the water buffalo know that beast will literally track down a man that wounds it for days. There are species of snake that will do the same. A dog will carry hate in its heart for someone that wronged it, and will even attack those that only resemble the one that hurt it, for the rest of its life. And yes, even cute little horsie-worsies can be as vengeful and vindictive as any other brute beast. Ask any rancher who's gotten on the ill tempered side of one.
Man is not the only animal that seeks revenge. And it's a little offensive to imply that we are.
As to Vengeance: Justice is just as full of schadenfreude, that does not make it any less justice. In fact I daresay there's something deeply wrong with someone who doesn't demand retribution for monstrous deeds. Jesus may forgive, but there's still a Hell.
Daring Do is just experiencing the truth Echo is suppressing: he's letting a vicious slaver and mass murderer get off scot free for his own convenience, and trying to cover it up with milksop rhetoric.
Awesometacular job as always Rust! Cool developement too! :D
It's stories like this that make it feel awesome to be a part of this fandom.
That was an awesome chapter what you talkin bout I enjoyed it. I also read it at well its two twelve right now and on a bad day i can read these chapters in an hour. Thanks for the good read before I pass out rock on.
A beautiful chapter, character growth, drama, and some comedy as always.
I lost it there.
Also.. AAAAPPLOOSAAA!!!!!
2739381 dude calm down
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Yeah.
But... this isn't Earth. They play by a different set of rules here. Equestria and Earth are similar, but at the core of things, they are fundamentally opposing.
YOU COME INTO MY HOUSE...
Wait, did you say "basic"? Another soon to be military brony!! HOOYAH!!!
MOAR!
Also, ninja spy:
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Didn't Trixie come back to Ponyville in Magic Duel to exact revenge on Twilight though? So evidently there is revenge.
Yet again, the great Rust makes magical tales!
Never stop being awesome.
I'll say this... while there's typos and such here? It does NOT feel like a weak chapter at all. This is good, Rusty. Very, very good.
That being said, real life comes first. If you want to take a break, I for one wouldn't blame you.
Actually, I think this is the best chapter in a while. I love the imagery you used in the dream sequence!
Thank you for the Daft Punk references. I needed that
The other character's perspectives are hit and miss for me, but I love every Daring and Echo chapter.
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Not to kill.
THAT is the difference between the species. Equines simply lack the instinct of domination that humans, having evolved as a Hunter and the Hunted, subconsciously carry. I see this trait expressed everyday, in old men and little girls alike. If anyone tells me otherwise they obviously have their head so far up their ass they can't see it happening.
Unless "twine" can mean something other than that stuff that's sort of like string but isn't, I'm pretty sure you mean "twain"
I've only ever heard this phrase used to refer to women, cuz let's face it, men kinda suck
Dropped a period
"Heel"? Singular?
That should be "container"
I am inclined to disagree; in fact I would go so far as to say he's been everything but normal
Ya just gotta love The Pirate Gentleman Code Guidelines.
It was a good chapter, IMO.
Also, because why not.
Welcome to AAAAPPLEOOSA!
Too bad there's no Braeburn emote...
Heh, heh, deportation jokes....I'm a bad person.
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Ignore him, he's pretty much a huge asshole and troll anyway.
You may think that this was the worst chapter you've ever written, but it's miles ahead of most authors in the ametuer fiction world. While the whole "downside of humanity" is done and redone many times in the more serious fics (both fanfiction and original), that doesn't mean it's bad. Your writing, character development, plot twists, and so on are at or even above the level of some profesional writers. I speak for most of your readership when I say that I wish I could write like that. Maybe some day.
Just putting my two cents in.
ho too good braddah
Rust, do us a favor and slap sense into yourself. This was an utterly fantastic chapter, I could't have hoped for any more. Expertly placed comedic relief, Beautiful exposition, and the perfect mix of pay-off and foreshadowing. Brother, you are what we aspire to be half of. Don't let yourself get down, because you really are going as strong has ever. Hang in there man
........And this story is still as absolutely awesome as it has been every step of the way. I think it's a shame that we'll seemingly never learn Echo's human name, or see him in human form in the real world (I just like humans, I guess. Whenever a story changes a human into something else, I find myself wishing the human could go back, I suppose it's because there's some sort of deep-seated pride in me that makes me think that Humans are some of the most awesome sapient creatures to exist) but that doesn't really change things, does it? No matter who he once was, no matter what he did for the UN at some point or another (that was this story, yes? I apologize if it's not, I have so many fanfic worlds being tracked in my head they get mixed up sometimes), he is no longer that person. He's Echo Ghostclaws, the magic-empowered Diamond Dog, Beta of the Cinderwings. With all that being said, I must now wonder how the part of Daring that is Human After All (great song, by the way) will play into the story. Generally more violent demeanor, I suppose, like when she suddenly exploded at Lady Pyrite - we humans aren't exactly known for our omnipresent kindness. Speaking of the Lady, I didn't realize this before now but her name has a meaning behind it, doesn't it? Pyrite is fool's gold. It appears to be something valuable but is, in truth, pretty worthless beyond an aesthetic viewpoint. So, the Lady appeared to have everything she could ever want, but really had nothing of value before Echo came along? Clever name, if that is indeed what you were getting at.
I wonder how the rest of the Cinderwing crew are faring in Roam right about now. Hopefully Echo can wrap things up with these Dust Devil reprobates quickly and get about pulling their flanks out of the fire.
The time is 4:20 AM. I have to be at work in 12 hours' time. The time spent to read this chapter = So Worth It.
Achievement Unlocked: Night Owl
-5 energy, +3 Sense of adventure,
Skill Unlocked: Internal Caffeine. Just when you thought the last of your energy was spent, you picked up a good book and your exhaustion evaporated!
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That's what Rarity said.
Hey, real life comes first. Spend some time with your lady friend and take a lil' break; you deserve it. :rariwink:
Another great chapter Rust, not that surprising that your going for the redemption route, so I don't know why so many are complaining. After all, you had the big redemption meeting with Discord a few chapters back. Though I must admit that while Tia has never been my fav pony, my opinion of her is steadily declining as I read more of what she did....Are you an anti-fan of the Solar Diarch as well? Sad to hear about the new girl in your life, I could practically hear all your fan girls screaming in denial.
A few errors, but this is the only one that seemed to bludgeon me upside the head:
*disappeared almost eight centuries years ago.
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There are no girls on the internet.
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Rust, I nearly stopped reading after over six months, when I first read The Ballad. Six months of dedication nearly ruined by that one sentence. Really now, do I have to say it?
Magic. Duel.
GYAAAAAGGGHH!
Really Rust, I thought you better than that.
2772625 Trixie's missing some tools from her shed as it twere
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Just ladies, creepy old women, and hookers.
Daft Punk in my Echo? Strangely intriguing.
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Justice can be twisted to those who mete it.
Really. I thought you knew me better.
Yes.
[url=en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Dash]This is good.
Daft Punk Reference Awesome!!!!!
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Zze bwuh huh? Jesus, I saw the avatar and was like, "Wait, I don't remember commenting on this story."
>>>Alone, we are merely dangerous. Together, we are nigh unstoppable. >>>
*Alondro chuckles and with a casual flick of his power, tosses an insignificant brown dwarf directly toward Earth.* Humans are also indescribably self-important and arrogant. So tiny, so fragile, so mortal. And they think so highly of themselves, less than dust in the vastness of the universe, unable still even to touch the closest star system to themselves.
The younger races like the human still need our guidance, clearly! But not the Shadows. No, they're bad. And they look like spiders, which are creepy. We Vorlons are the bestest!
Can anyone tell me what's Daring is telling Echo when they are awake?
I feel ashamed for not understanding