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ForgottenDreams
I bid you welcome traveler let this ancient storyteller do what he does best. https://www.youtube.com/channel/UCcsS60n04i48UCZJ0lYPGsQ
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Horror isn't your specialty, is it?
7017712 depends on what you call horror. Suspense not so much working on it though. My specialties are sorrow and inner conflicts. such as depression, insanity as well as heartbreak. Right now I am more or less getting back into story writing it has been almost a decade since I've written a story. Bare with me ok I'm still getting the rust off. My stuff will get better promise.
7017712 if you're a horror enthusiast try this one on for size.http://www.fimfiction.net/story/313212/greed That is if you haven't read it yet.
Sorrow, insanity, heartbreak... I grimaced at that.
7017755 well you're not suppose to smile
Ehh, it was...ok, I guess?I think it had potential, but unfortunately the story was pretty flawed:
1- first of all, the grammar:you really need to put commas, because otherwise your story becomes a jumbled mess where it's hard to understand where a phrase is ending and where another one starts
2- the lack of details:sure, this can be interpreted as "details were lacking because it was a dream" but the ending proved that...it wasn't?
3-the plot:again, the plot kinda falls flat due to the lack of details.You are thrown into the story full force, there isn't really any buildup to anything
4-the ending:I'm kinda conflicted about this one, mostly because it's cliche, but like I said, due to the writing it somewhat makes sense.But at the same time, I don't like it because it's a cheap way out and it doesn't really explain how Twilight got home:was she hypnotized?why did they actually let her go?