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Comment posted by PlieRow666 deleted Mar 10th, 2016

The dislikes are real in this one.

Put it on the maybe shelf, let's see how it goes.

You description needs to be more...descriptive. As it is, there is NO clue what the story is even about. That alone is going to turn away a lot of potential readers.

7017747 Thanks for letting me know. I changed so it has more.

I'm also in the middle of writing the new chapter. It should be up in a few days. Also editing a few things for chapter 1.

Aight so that was sexy.
You need a proof-reader though.
I ain't doin' it.

Does anyone want to see another prelude chapter, or just want me to start the main story already. I'm going to let you readers decide.

Main story please .it OK update soon.

7032830 I'd work on the main story,and when it finished and people still want more go prequel

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