Twilight finds an ancient book, that was buried under the ruins of her old library home. She takes it home and opens it, transforming herself into the most powerful evil Equestria has ever seen!
You description needs to be more...descriptive. As it is, there is NO clue what the story is even about. That alone is going to turn away a lot of potential readers.
That it?
The dislikes are real in this one.
Put it on the maybe shelf, let's see how it goes.
You description needs to be more...descriptive. As it is, there is NO clue what the story is even about. That alone is going to turn away a lot of potential readers.
7017747 Thanks for letting me know. I changed so it has more.
I'm also in the middle of writing the new chapter. It should be up in a few days. Also editing a few things for chapter 1.