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Probably because I don't remember seeing a single F/SN-MLP fic complete?

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Think a few years ago I went looking in a group for F/SN-MLP fics, and not one was complete. I presume that is why they never added a F/SN tag.

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Ah, thanks for clearing that up. I was kinda confused.

I quite like it so far. Also curious as to what Saber's dragon name is.

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Name's are surprisingly difficult, I mean Shirou's name is a reference to the UBW.

What are Saber and Rin's Equestrian names?
Are you going to mention what Shirou was doing during the Nightmare Moon event?

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We'll find out what happened on Nightmare Moon's return in the third chapter I think. We're however going to wait until our beta can look over the first two chapters, I kinda got impatient to post them. :twilightsheepish:
As for Equestrian names... well I was thinking Saber/Authuria could just be Saber while Rin would be... honestly something to do with jewels. Gleaming Jewel perhaps? I don' t know.

The first chapter of the story has just been Beta'd! So check it out if you all want!

Oh, so Rin is a Changeling? I must have missed that. What did Rin and Saber do during the Nightmare Moon fiasco?

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Saber was dealing with Dragon politics while Rin was traveling around Equestria like Trixie only she wasn't a stage performer.

...sir might i just say that this story was a pleasant surprise and i hope to see more from it soon

This is a wonderful story, but I'd like to see Sakura and Ilya show up as well even if they don't join in the sexy fun times. Ilya would make a great griffon and Sakura could be a Diamond Dog so she can keep doing archery. I almost feel sorry for Tirek when he takes Rin and Shirou's magic, he's going to be eating several Excalibur to the face if Saber doesn't just roast him alive to the point Twilight just has to tap him to beat him.

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Funny you mention the psycho loli and Sakure. Me and Dio were actually talking about them. I can't say if they'll appear for certain or not but just know that the idea has occoured to us.i But all the same I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

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Do you really think Zelretch would miss the opportunity to cause more fun by tossing those two in???? Bonus points if Ilya ends up somehow bringing her mom along and Irisviel gets to have a long and happy life with her while mothering the whole group. Or Berserker gets to smack Tirek around a bit.

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Excellent! Also, if Shirou manages to get Saber pregnant, Mordred should get a second chance with a happy family as their Dragon/Pony hybrid daughter. Also, if Archer Emiya shows up, he needs to appear as an alicorn so everyone can call him Princess... and he has to hide from Luna and Celestia trying to get some Alicorn loving from him.

great chapter i hope to see more soon

It could have been worse. Zelretch once showed me a world wherein Irisviel, my sort of adopted mom, was the core of the Holy Grail, and rather than conduct a traditional Holy Grail War, though it did have similarities, made all the Servants female so I could then produce “an army of grandchildren” for her and Kiritsugu. How that version of me survived, or had any money, is anyone’s guess.

Oh my god, that was a reference to Fate/Harem Antics wasn't it?

Will Sakura and Medusa show up?

Dude. You used EMIYA's aria rather than Shirou's.

Shirou's aria, after his confrontation with Archer was:

My body is made out of swords.
My blood is of iron and my heart of glass.
I have overcome countless battlefields.
Not even once retreating,
Not even once being victorious.
The bearer lies here alone, forging iron in a hill of swords.
Thus, my life needs no meaning.
This body is made out of infinite swords.

It has a different underlying meaning to Archer's aria.

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Yes, yes it was.


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Thanks. I'll change that. Honestly I just grabbed the first one to sound good on the Type-Moon wiki

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What's interesting is that the difference between the two is more obvious in the less literal translation:

Counter Guardian EMIYA's aria:

I am the bone of my sword
Steel is my body and fire is my blood
I have created over a thousand blades
Unknown to Death,
Nor known to Life.
Have withstood pain to create many weapons
Yet, those hands will never hold anything
So as I pray, Unlimited Blade Works.

Shirou Emiya's aria, after confronting EMIYA and deciding how he's going to pursue his unattainable goal:

I am the bone of my sword.
Steel is my body and fire is my blood.
I have created over a thousand blades.
Unaware of loss,
Nor aware of gain.
Withstood pain to create weapons, waiting for one’s arrival.
I have no regrets. This is the only path.
My whole life was Unlimited Blade Works.

Whereas Archer is all about sorrow and regret, Shirou is all about resolve and hope.

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Which fits the various routes and their look at Shirou and his ideals. Fate-He keeps at it. UBW-He keeps at it, but understands the hypocrosies and flaws with it. HF-He abandons them, to an extent, focusing on only protecting and saving one person, Sakura

Caught that reference to Carnival Phantasm.

It is good that Shirou has people who love him so much.

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Well Shirou has ALL the Swords (And spears, and so on, and so for)
So We shall have ALL the References! (Or at least a lot of them... granted their mostly from Dio and me occasionally making one by accident.)

great chapter... i would demand another but I'm not wearing golden armor...

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Which makes me wonder what Shirou's full aria would be if he ever actualized the Reality Marble in the Heaven's Feel timeline.

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You can. And actually we're working on something too. But no telling you what though!~ 😛

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That it would actually. BUt with him discarding his ideals or whatever... like break the UBW or something?

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Or warp it. I mean, its kind of similar to Miyu's version of Shirou, whose UBW was cold and snowy, as he had forsaken everything else to protect his adopted sis

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Nah. Unlimited Blade Works is about swords and the infinite creation of swords, not ideals or being a hero or any of that. If Shirou changes, the marble changes, but swords and things related to swords will always be at the center of who he is. Archer was a horribly depressed person, so his was smoggy with gears in the sky, Shirou had hope for the future and a ton of resolve, so his had the dawning sun and no smog.

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Nope.

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I can see that. But I've read a lot of different ideas about the UBW in all honesty. But to be honest I like your idea.

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A lot of fans give more complexity to it than is warranted. The same with Reality Marbles in general. A human doesn't actually need a "broken/distorted" mind to create one, just magecraft, time and research. However, 99.99999999% of magi won't bother because it's fiddly and dangerous and not terribly useful for their goal of reaching the Root. You can't get at the heart of everything by putting another layer of reality between yourself and everything else.

However, Shirou has an edge in actualizing one because of Avalon and his Sword/Sword nature, plus all of his magecraft is an outgrowth of his early, unconscious manifestation of Unlimited Blade Works. He got a leg up on it due to bleedover from Archer as well. UBW is his one and only Foundation for magecraft.

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Hence why, in UBW, he states "I don't create swords. I create a world that holds swords without number. That is the only magic allowed to Shirou Emiya." In HF, with the aid of Archer's arm, he can do far more, but at the cost that, as the UBW anime referenced, swords that growing out of his body, to the point that, by the end of HF, he audibly creaks with each movement. Oh, and his mind is slowly being eroded

ok, two things one: The why boner: The Vengence! out now for $2.99. Two: I was laughing maniacally while reading this chapter... is that normal?

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It's only wrong if you think it's wrong.
I don't think its wrong, hell I was grinning at certain parts when I and Dio was writing this!
Especially when Shirou's is being all introspective.
Though I don't know who I like best Rillya or Rindred.

Will I need to play Fate/Stay Night in order to understand this story?

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no you can watch the animes (yes there is more than one) and you'd understand about as much

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Hell I want to get the VN of Fate/Stay Night but it's pretty much impossible to find a copy. So I settled for second hand sources. Of and DIo's helping me keep the Fate-lore rightish. We are taking creative liberities for the sheer amusement factor.

But regardless are you enjoying the story so far?

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