Although Luna has transitioned nicely into Equestrian society, she still has one thing left to do, get an apprentice that can rule beside her
Hello Everypony, I am a high school student that goes to an American school, living in Taichung, Taiwan (an island off the coast of China), though I have an Australian passport.
Although Luna has transitioned nicely into Equestrian society, she still has one thing left to do, get an apprentice that can rule beside her
Very interesting so far. I'm looking forward for more.
One thing caught my eye...
As fond as I am of pony hugs, I don't know why Rose's Mom would hug me.
Still, I will follow this story, because Luna is best pony.
I wonder how this duo will go. Good chappy and good story so far.
There is a slight disturbance in the balance during this chapter...
Maybe if she had a different history, it would have gone a another path.
Good little story.
I can think of a few suggestions, Vinyl Scratch,
Trixie,Sweetie bell...that sounds like the standard backstory for Sunset Shimmer.
This mare has an abacus for a heart. Thinking about only the bottom line.
Aysel seems to be walking the same path as Sunset Shimmer did.b I'm worried about it.