It's raining in Canterlot. Princess Celestia contemplates this.
A quick one-shot to work through some of my own grief.
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Thank you for writing this. You can feel the raw emotion and power this had- it brought back a lot of memories for me. Some good, some bad- a bittersweet mix that opened my eyes. I hope there will be sunshine in your life soon. For everyone.
I really liked this fic. Showing how life must've felt for Celestia during her life without Luna. How things just went on a loop for her The only problem I did have was in terms of the writing. The wall of text where Celestia is telling Tea Berry how she and Luna ascended to the throne. I believe it was inconsistently huge. I say that it should be broken down to a couple of paragraphs instead. Finally , I recommend you use the [][/] for italics if you want to emphasize words, instead of All caps and forward slashes.
But overall, this was a great sadfic nonetheless. Good job to you.
6430418 thank you for the feedback, I greatly appreciate it!! I didn't do much editing before slapping this up here so I will tinker with that a bit. :)
6430402 thank you for reading! I'm glad others can relate. I hope the sun will shine again soon, too. At least I feel better after writing this.
That was wonderful
, in a heart-wrenching kind of way. You've done an amazing job with the emotion here, the only remarks I can think of overlap with 6430418 .
Other than that, you've got yourself a fave my good friend, and here's hoping that the clouds in your life clear up.
6431992 thank you very kindly. I really appreciate you taking the time to comment! Definitely gonna sit down this evening and do some editing to polish it up.
Thank you, I hope the rain clears sometime too. I didn't work this story past Sunset, as I believe in my headcanon shortly after that was Twilight, and the beginning of the end of Celestia's incredible loneliness. I haven't had my redemption yet, and thus left the story here. Its amazing what little cartoon horses can do to tell a story of ones own suffering and loss. I'm really humbled that my little story here has resonated with others. Thank you so much!
6430418
6431992
Finally had a chance to do some editing, with your suggestions in mind. Hopefully it reads better now and thank you both for your feedback!
6436123
You're Welcome, my friend.
6436123
Always happy to help.
Thank you
7302141
You're welcome! I like your stories. :) I'm glad you liked this one!
I love this story, it's so dark and sad
Sad I only just found this story. I really enjoy sad tales like this and I even felt myself tear up a bit with empathy as I remembered the hard times I had.
Thank you for this. I wish I had found this story sooner.
I LOVE this story!!!! You really captured Celestia's real character! Thank you so much for writing this!!! :D