The mane 6, Spike and The Cutie Mark Crusaders go deep down into the Everfree and find a secret forcefield and they step into it and they turn into cats and join ThunderClan and start understanding the ways of The Warrior Code and decide to stay there until they find the forcefield again. Will they find the forcefield or will they have to stay cats and say goodbye to Equestria forever?
The picture is what they look like in the story if you didn't know what they looked like. Also, the story takes place in the forest before they moved to the lake and it takes place before Firestar's death...SPOILER ALRET!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
It takes place after the cutie mark crusaders get their cutie marks in season 5.
Chapters (9)
Hi, Bye~Dash!
This reminds me of my early days on that other fanfiction website, where the chapters were. tiny and the stories really bad.
Need an example?
That sentence alone hurts my soul. Vague sentence is so vague it could be in the middle of space for all we know. Or rather, sensing a spider that happened to get too close to the tree of harmony. It literally tells us nothing other than that twilight canse sense stuff.
Props for the picture though.
So, I think I'm gonna try this story. I've been a fan of the Warriors Series for as long as I can remember.
I will say this, though. The description really discouraged me. It looks like a little kid wrote it. So I am really unsure about this story. I'll still read it, but right now, it looks like a ten-year-old is writing it. (My apologies if you actually are a ten year old. If so, it's perfectly fine.)
6885070 I am older than a kid, I just like to write children fanfics and I want to be a children books author so yeah~Dashie D.
Why am i reading this. it has spoilers from warriors and im reading it too
Hm, not bad. With a little editing, it could have lots of potential!
This is new...
Do we get a sequel?
6891715 Yes, I working on it right now.
6891751 yay ~ fluttershy
6883742 I agree with you.
To the author, I am sorry, but there is no way in hell I will read garbage like this. (No offense)
Not a bad concept, but you need to add more detail, give a reason why tell the time of day and other stuff. Try and hit the 1000 word minimum or higher. That way, your story might actually keep my attention.
Continue! It is your destiny!
But sadly...The sequel was never released