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Two Aliens and a Robot

When Zim finds out his mission was fake, he turns mortal battles for the Earth into friendly competitions with Dib. A wormhole goes haywire, and the two find themselves crashing into a purple palace of crystal on a planet inhabited by ponies. And it turns out they're going to be stuck there for a very long time.
And of course GIR had to come along.

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Fresnor

Fresnor #1 · Dec 13th, 2015 · · · Crashing ·

I'm currently here for one thing. Waiting to see what happens when GIR meets Pinkie Pie and Fluttershy.

nightmaster0

nightmaster0 #2 · Dec 14th, 2015 · · · Crashing ·

Great start eager to see more.

run4thing57

run4thing57 #3 · Dec 14th, 2015 · · · Crashing ·

I have two things to say

1:Please,Please,Please don't give up on this.I have seen some good ideas(which is quite reir because a LOT of the ideas I have seen recently are pretty bad)and the authors simply abandon them.

2:Zim is a bit to friendly with Dib.Just a suggestion and you should probably make him a bit more............Zim.I mean this I Mr."YOU LIE!!YOU LIE!!!!!" but do stick with what you have.If you do take my advice try not to change it too much,I like your style of writing.

antinomian

antinomian #4 · Dec 14th, 2015 · · · Crashing ·

>>run4thing57 Thanks for your opinion!

Don't worry, I'm pretty sure this story will be sticking around awhile. I'm actually feeling I'll have to update it on a regular basis, unlike the stories I created in the scary place of Wattpad.

I never update those.

Anyway, you're right about the Zim thing. I'm just as bad with characterization as I am with romance, but I kinda wanted to show that Zim changed a bit since he figured out the Tallest hate him. I dunno how to describe how Zim's changed, but he has.

shadowling