Things can change fast. One day, the young filly Raindrop Day has a normal happy life. The next, she worries about her father while deciding to break some rules in order to help a colt struggling with finding out what he's destined for. Over the course of a single week her life changes forever.
This short story is me experimenting in writing a story made specifically to evoke sadness in the reader. I wanted to write it in order to possibly grow as a writer. If you find faults in it, then please say so. I expect there to be many flaws, as I haven't written many works. If you think it's good, then great! If you think it's bad, then good! If you think it's bad and say why, then fantastic! Constructive criticism rules!
Chapters (7)
Life is like a cookie jar. It's pleasing to look at, and holds great things, but after a while all the little kids shoving their hands into it and bugging the shit out of you to get them a cookie drives you to suicide.
"Life is like a cookie jar. Things can change fast."
I feel like I'm not making a connection here.
Edit: Regidar basically has it down actually.