A short story of what would happen if Discord went all 'co-co-lo-co' and what would happen if Twilight fought him.--- mostly.
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Magical Shield
Like Singers and their songs, and dancers with their dancing, a writers way of expressing their thoughts and emotions is through writing. Thats when imagination come to life. ~~MS
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Here lays Twlight Sparkle
2015-2015
I crie eveery time
By the way this was a good read!
6641843 Thank you!
Glad you liked it! 
Hmm... I started reading this, but it went quite jumpy and confusing right a few paragraphs into Twilight's POV. They were having a tea party one moment and suddenly, it shifted to describing the results of few of Discord's attacks... or not?
Also, remember that proper names and I are always capitalized. From the beginning's look, I believe this could be great and emotional story, but this confusing part is what turns most readers off. I'm sorry to write such a negative comment, but I think this is better than any form of sugarcoating, albeit definitely more bitter.
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Oh its fineee 😛😛 I'm a little off when it comes to writing, I'm still kinda new to it all, so thanks for the review! I'll give a quick run though and make a few edits (and possibly re-write it if I know myself well enough😂)
But it wasnt a negative comment, it was a helpful one. Thanks for pointing things out! 😀😁
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You're welcome