• Member Since 14th Nov, 2015
  • offline last seen Jan 30th, 2021

BlearyROBIN


Howdy Y`all! Welcome to my page! I`m a Brony that just recently joined the fandom. Private first class in the Brony empire. As i said i`m new so i ain`t an expert about mlp. Hope y`all enjoys my page.

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Years have passed since the war began and ended. AppleJack and her sister Apple bloom is living a good life on their farm, Sweet Apple Acres. But it does`nt matter how much AppleJack tries. Memories of the war and the loss of her family and friends keeps haunting her. In this story we will follow Applejack and her sister through an unforgiving war that scarred Applejack for life.



Authors note: Allright, this is the first story i`ve ever written. This story does not follow the original My little pony: Friendship is magic story and universe. Also English is not my first language, so i apologize for any grammar fails. Hope you`ll like it.

Chapters (4)
Comments ( 2 )

When you mention Big Mac's full name you spell it MacIntosh, not Macintosh. I know it looks weird but it's correct. Also make sure to capitalize all "I"s that are by themselves. Good story! Would appreciate more country "twang" in Applejack's father.

6647363 Oh you`re right. I did do that. Sorry for that bro, i most have got tired and did`nt pay much attention to those little misstakes :facehoof:. Thanks for the feedback bro :twilightsmile:

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