Rarity goes in search of rubies for a custom dress order with spike, when she finds an alien gem, that she just HAS to have. After taking it home, she finds she has been having immense sharp pains in her back, legs and other various parts of her body.
It's getting worse, Rarity is crying out in pain in her sleep, and Sweetie Bell worries for her health, and has all the right to after what is bound to happen to her poor sister.
This is the raw unedited version of the story, so there's bound to be a LOT of errors 
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I'm VERY FAR from being finished with this story!
This is going to include a bit of gore, so it is definitely not for the faint of heart :3
6615375 it is unedited I just recently typed it
Ooh... This gem sounds mysteriously enchanting... I wonder what'll happen next!
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What!?!?! But how could a gem that beautiful possibly cause trouble? It's so dazzling... 
Then why did you post it?
And for the record, I haven't read the story, but your description could use an editor as well. You spelled "rubies" wrong, plus you capitalized it when there's no reason to. You also failed to capitalize Sweetie Belle's name.
6616169 I apoligize, I realize this, I just haven't had time to edit it latley, and I thought I would post it
Sure it's not the best move on my part but at least people can point out my mistakes, I don't mind critique.
Simply stating that you are aware of its errors is not an excuse for making those errors. It's simple: Don't post something that's not ready to be posted.