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Luna discoveres a strange filly on her balcony.
When she goes to question Twilight about this, she finds that Twilight is dealing with something strange of her own!
This filly shouldn't be there and it shouldn't exist but it does, why no pony knows not even twilight.
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I really like the idea, but this definitely needs an editor to help clarify things a bit. I could help if you want me to.
Thanks for the positive comment, yes I do realize I need to edit it quite a bit
6614299 if you could help me that would be amazing :3
6614406 How about if I PM you an edited version of a couple of paragraphs of this story? Then you could see what you think.
6614424 that sounds nice thank you very much! :)