A Missing Mystery

When Lemon Zest goes missing, Sunny Flare, Indigo Zap, and Sour Sweet are left to search for her to lift Indigo out of her little depression stage.

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EpicShadowz

EpicShadowz #1 · Nov 8th, 2015 · · ·

Is it just me, or is there some serious Life is Strange vibes coming from this?

Serket808

Serket808 #2 · Nov 8th, 2015 · · ·

6612587 When my friend pre-read it she said that too, although I don't know what it is.

EpicShadowz

EpicShadowz #3 · Nov 8th, 2015 · · ·

6614736 its a video game.

Dragon Eye

Dragon Eye #4 · Nov 9th, 2015 · · ·

Are you continuing this

Serket808

Serket808 #5 · Nov 9th, 2015 · · ·

6616595 This is a sequel to another book, A Broken Twin

PinkyPie25800

PinkyPie25800 #6 · Nov 17th, 2015 · · ·

If there is a sequel to this, and Lemon is going into the woods to commit suicide too, then I WILL cry. Why do I have a feeling that that's what she's going to do?!?!?

Flailus

Flailus #7 · Nov 17th, 2015 · 1 · ·

The story defiantly shows some promise. However, there are several spelling mistakes and questionable word choices in this story. I'd suggest proof-reading your stories and checking for correct spelling on words you don't know how to spell and look up definitions of words so you don't use them incorrectly. For ex: "Indigo was a sham without her." sham is used incorrectly here. I'd suggest changing sham to "nervous wreck" or "total drag." Hope this helped.