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A strange island has been found in the Pacific Ocean and The military has sent a task force to find a group of explorers that are presumed dead. This task force lead by Lieutenant Gary Peterson has found strange and highly intelligent creatures on this island. But what they do not know is that the events occurring on this island will put humanity and ponykind at the brink of extinction.
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Good, good, but you need an editor.
I've edited both chapters if any one finds any errors let me know
No offense man but edit doesn't only mean "correct misspelled words." You gotta put more effort into it than just spell check. I suggest reading this out loud and fixing the mistakes as you hear them. That is one of the best ways to edit.
7135341 Ok I will thanks for the advice!
I have to say I'm interested but could you try and make the chapters a bit longer please
7138803 I will try to make the next chapter atleast 4000 words
Hey man how goes the next chapter I hope it's going well and hope to read it soon
Also I have a question where do you plan on taking the story because it's too early to really tell
And just to let you know you don't have to make the chapters 4000 words long as long as it's between 2300 to 3400 it should be fine I was just talking about the first chapter It was too short for The beginning it was kind hard to get a feel for it
It's alive it's alive I am still intrigued keep it up
Not bad Will have to see where this goes
And you got to be fucking stupid to declare war on the US military
Also calling humans monsters is a mistake we are not monsters we are the apex predators of the world and equestria will soon learn this
This project has been canceled, if you would like to know why read my latest blogpost.