• Member Since 5th Feb, 2015
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Broman


A guy who loves to create stories and has a big imagination. Also wishes to become a famous Actor and Director.

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Appleseed is always searching for something in his life. He feels the need to move on from the farm life and to start somewhere on his own, yet he doesn't quite understand why. On his latest delivery he would meet a mare in the big city and over time he will slowly piece together what he was truly missing in life. There was only one word that was missing in his life, in this big beautiful world. It was a little word that many tend to forget even when it hits close to home.

That little word is called a family.

Cover Art was done by the most talent and awesome Arby. He helped make the picture as to how I wanted and it turned out much better then what I had hope. He has all my thanks for this wonderful cover!

Editing done by both rainbowDarth and Dimensional rift_13, I have them to thank for getting the small bits that I have missed and suggesting what to add.

Proofreading done by WingmanRed. I can't thank him enough for the wonderful suggestions and help wording the scenes to make it flow better and making the story more interesting.

Do check these guys out, because they are awesome.

Chapters (5)
Comments ( 12 )

Let me guess is this an Applejacks parents story?

6807947 You are correct. :twilightsmile:

6807988 Sweet! I don't see many stories about them. :twilightsmile:

6808002 I'm sure you will enjoy this story. I got many more chapters for this story in the near future.

Amazing first chapter!

The characters are really great! I love how you did the world building and pacing.

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Thanks so much. I try to make the characters all unique as possible.

Well that's cool! Introducing Rainbow Blaze, I wonder if you are going to have the other main 6 parents in the story?

6813219 It's a possibility. :raritywink: Some maybe introduced, others could be mentioned. You never know with this story. You'll just have to wait and see. :twilightsmile:

I remember when i helped with i think it was the first 2 or 3 chapters

7332365 Yeah I know it's been awhile. I plan to getting back to this, but for now, I got other stories that I have planned at the moment. I might pop in a chapter or two when I get the chance. :twilightsmile:

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