Lyra Heartstrings may be a lyrist by trade, but her passion has always been Anthropology - the study of Humans. She's always dreamed of seeing the world they live in. One day, a random encounter gives her the chance she's always dreamed of: to see live humans.
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And that's when humans got interested in delicious healthy 100% lean pony meat... Jk.
It seems like you really rushed this chapter, trying to get to the point as quickly as possible.
Really good story here so far, but it almost seem like your rushing it.
Please don't rush it.
Thanks for the constructive criticism. I'll try to slow the pacing down.